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Dark Promise

dhuron
Member

since 2000-03-19

Posts 476

0 posted 2000-04-02 09:30 PM

Standing in the middle
of the ruin you caused
Hearing the Cries
Feeling the Screeching of souls

Enough!
No more,
You shall not
Hurt anyone Else

As the Ominous clouds
choke the sun, my
Desire for Retribution
Fills my being

In the bleak Darkness,
The Promise is made.
You will pay...
oh you will pay dearly

Be Warned,
My mind, heart, and Soul
Have taken up Arms
ready for Battle

Your Fate, Your Demise
Are in My hands now
The Day is near
So very near.....

just_another_fe
Member

since 2000-02-05

Posts 483
MICHIGAN

1 posted 2000-04-02 10:33 PM

dhuron~
oOoOoOo get em.

Good poem.I'm glad that you finally said enough is enough.Good Luck ~Angie

Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member

since 2000-03-21

Posts 680
Kansas

2 posted 2000-04-02 11:16 PM

Great Poem!!! Fighting back is something I havent accomplished yet. But this poem shows me it is possible! Thanks

Peace

I do not love you for being perfect.....
I love you for being perfect for me!!

Jannel
Member

since 2000-01-18

Posts 492
Muncie, IN, USA

3 posted 2000-04-03 01:08 AM

i loved the formattting and the choice of word capitalization. oh, and the strength. wow. excellent work.
jann elizabeth

Love is so short, and forgetting so long.
-Pablo Neruda

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

4 posted 2000-04-03 01:23 AM

I'll go with Jannell on this one, great work Daniel

There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)

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