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dhuron
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since 2000-03-19
Posts 476


0 posted 2000-03-31 09:59 AM


Unnoticed by everyone
Trapped in my
Miserable existence
Invisible

Tears running
down my face, Red Tears
Tears from the bleeding Soul,
Staining my face

Passed by as
I was just waste
on the sidewalk,
Just disposable waste

Cold and Empty Stares
Piercing my Body, and
Petrifying My Soul
like the wicked Medusa

Shattering
My Soul is gone
As I am taken away
Into the Shadowy Depths


© Copyright 2000 Daniel Huron - All Rights Reserved
Hope, tears, and renewal
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since 2000-03-27
Posts 74

1 posted 2000-03-31 02:41 PM


We all visit the "shadowy depths" sometimes, dhuron.  I just hope you can pull yourself out.  Awesome writing, looking forward to more.
Broken Wings
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since 2000-03-18
Posts 157
Miami, FL.
2 posted 2000-03-31 04:41 PM


This is very deep and painful...i too often feel this way, but i figure you gotta love and care for yourself....lift yourself out of the darkness, cuz if we sit there and wait for a hand we might go too deep for anyone to reach us.

**HUG**
take care
Broken Wings


 "As you learn and grow, you will realize the greater the pain, the greater the growth."
-IYANLA VANZANT


Aiden Kelly
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since 2000-02-14
Posts 148
Ft. Wayne, IN USA
3 posted 2000-03-31 06:49 PM


WOW!!! you're on a role!  this is awesome poetry!  feeling invisible, feeling like trash, disposable...wow!  you convey these emotions so well.  love the words -- 'Red Tears' and 'Petrifying My Soul'...wow!
Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
4 posted 2000-03-31 07:26 PM


Wow - powerful poem, dhuron.  I can relate completely to this poem in full.  Love the Medusa referance,t oo.


Michael

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