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Dark Poetry #1

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dhuron
Member

since 2000-03-19

Posts 476

0 posted 2000-03-31 09:59 AM

Unnoticed by everyone
Trapped in my
Miserable existence
Invisible

Tears running
down my face, Red Tears
Tears from the bleeding Soul,
Staining my face

Passed by as
I was just waste
on the sidewalk,
Just disposable waste

Cold and Empty Stares
Piercing my Body, and
Petrifying My Soul
like the wicked Medusa

Shattering
My Soul is gone
As I am taken away
Into the Shadowy Depths

Hope, tears, and renewal
Member

since 2000-03-27

Posts 74

1 posted 2000-03-31 02:41 PM

We all visit the "shadowy depths" sometimes, dhuron. I just hope you can pull yourself out. Awesome writing, looking forward to more.

Broken Wings
Member

since 2000-03-18

Posts 157
Miami, FL.

2 posted 2000-03-31 04:41 PM

This is very deep and painful...i too often feel this way, but i figure you gotta love and care for yourself....lift yourself out of the darkness, cuz if we sit there and wait for a hand we might go too deep for anyone to reach us.

**HUG**
take care
Broken Wings

"As you learn and grow, you will realize the greater the pain, the greater the growth."
-IYANLA VANZANT

Aiden Kelly
Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 148
Ft. Wayne, IN USA

3 posted 2000-03-31 06:49 PM

WOW!!! you're on a role! this is awesome poetry! feeling invisible, feeling like trash, disposable...wow! you convey these emotions so well. love the words -- 'Red Tears' and 'Petrifying My Soul'...wow!

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

4 posted 2000-03-31 07:26 PM

Wow - powerful poem, dhuron. I can relate completely to this poem in full. Love the Medusa referance,t oo.

Michael

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