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ChainedAngel
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since 2000-01-07
Posts 55
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0 posted 2000-03-31 07:04 AM


I went to the Garden of Love,
And saw what I never had seen:
A Chapel was build in the midst,
Where i used to play on the green.

And the gates of this Chapel were shut,
And Thou shalt not. writ over the door.
So i turn'd to the Garden of Love,
That so many sweet flowers bore,

And i saw it was filled with graves,
And tomb-stones where flowers should be:
And Priests in black gowns, were walking their rounds,
And binding with briars, my joys & desires.


[This message has been edited by ChainedAngel (edited 03-31-2000).]

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Dark Enchantress
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since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258
meet Morgana
1 posted 2000-03-31 09:01 AM


Beautifully sad poem ChainedAngel...I know this feeling all too well...but don't worry...with time your joys and desires will be bound no longer. Just make sure you're ready.  

                  Yours truly,
                     Angel


 "The dark weight of the hour
humming madly
filling my head
with blood
and sorrow
and dread
the executioner's song."
-Jewel
"The Dark Bells"

~*Angel of Darkness*~



Broken Wings
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since 2000-03-18
Posts 157
Miami, FL.
2 posted 2000-03-31 04:37 PM


I know how this feels....sometimes i wonder if happiness is always going to be kept from me, but we gotta have faith that our time will come! **HUG**

take care,
Broken Wings


 "As you learn and grow, you will realize the greater the pain, the greater the growth."
-IYANLA VANZANT


Aiden Kelly
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since 2000-02-14
Posts 148
Ft. Wayne, IN USA
3 posted 2000-03-31 07:01 PM


such a beautiful picture that you paint yet so sad! happiness does seem so beautiful and love so bright and then you see the tombs and the reality sets in...though someday you'll find love...be patient (i'm still waiting too but it'll come!)  good luck!    great poem, my friend!!!  
danni
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since 1999-11-20
Posts 688
wisconsin
4 posted 2000-04-01 12:29 PM


soft and sad images painted with beautiful words. well done, chained angel.
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