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ShadowHeart
Junior Member

since 2000-03-25

Posts 49

0 posted 2000-03-30 08:51 PM

I wish I could stay
in that moment,
when you told me you
loved and cared for me.

Why couldn't I expect
you would lose your love for me,
And reject my love
for life on your own?

I wondered if you would
ever come back,
And relized that
there wasn't a chance.

That's when I dried
my tears,
And moved on
with my life.

My hurt and pain
behind me,
Cause I realized
time won't keep.

Love is our greatest weakness
but when it's found,
it's our greatest strength.

just_another_fe
Member

since 2000-02-05

Posts 483
MICHIGAN

1 posted 2000-03-30 09:59 PM

Shadow~
Don't we all
wish that we could
stay there.Everytime we
are in love we think "this is
going to be forever" we never think
they will leave and it hurts like hell
when they do.After there gone we seem to hold onto that hope that they will be back but it don't always work out that way for
us. I am very happy to see that you have moved on with your life that is
one of the hardest things
to do when we love
someone.
~Angie

[This message has been edited by just_another_fe (edited 03-30-2000).]

Broken Wings
Member

since 2000-03-18

Posts 157
Miami, FL.

2 posted 2000-03-31 01:10 AM

GREAT POEM! I love your strength!

take care
Broken Wings

"As you learn and grow, you will realize the greater the pain, the greater the growth."
-IYANLA VANZANT

Dark Enchantress
Senior Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 1258
meet Morgana

3 posted 2000-03-31 09:14 AM

Excellent poem Shadow....I know what you're feeling and I'm glad you were able to pick yourself back up.

Yours truly,
Angel

"The dark weight of the hour
humming madly
filling my head
with blood
and sorrow
and dread
the executioner's song."
-Jewel
"The Dark Bells"

~*Angel of Darkness*~

ShadowHeart
Junior Member

since 2000-03-25

Posts 49

4 posted 2000-03-31 07:41 PM

Thanks to all of you! Your support is really encouraging.

Love is our greatest weakness
but when it's found,
it's our greatest strength.

danni
Senior Member

since 1999-11-20

Posts 688
wisconsin

5 posted 2000-04-01 12:49 PM

no, time won't keep. i lost five years, waiting.....
i will never make that mistake again!
well done shadow.

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