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| Dark Poetry #1 |
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I'm fine...thank you ...*** dedicated *** |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
I’m fine...thank you... I'm fine...thank you I dwell in bizarre pasts, speaking to myself. I sense the times unwinding in a pace that pricks. There is that memory box in my aching mind and my heart that pounds reminding me I'm alive. While you can't remember to ask, I can't seem to forget. I'm fine... thank you. I need a moment of truth that senses belonging. I see the fabrication to last eternally. Enigmatically time is ticking; I can't see it again. Out of sight; still in the heart You forgot to remember; I must remember to forget. I'm fine... thank you. Like tides that wash the shores, your brilliant disguise erases recollection. A sigh of relief is what we've become. Oblivious, you prevail. I'm fine... I have you to thank. **dedicated to anyone who knows what it is to live in lies** < !signature--> you don't have to understand completely..to love completely... remember even the darkest night has a morning to meet...you'll understand someday... Avanti Rao [This message has been edited by AVANTI (edited 04-12-2000).] |
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Sandra Cox Junior Member
since 2000-03-24
Posts 48Essex, London,UK |
I understand............... Great words, great feeling. Best Wishes Sandra |
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Broken Wings Member
since 2000-03-18
Posts 157Miami, FL. |
The only life i've ever known. Great poem. Thank You. **HUG** take care Broken Wings< !signature--> "As you learn and grow, you will realize the greater the pain, the greater the growth." -IYANLA VANZANT [This message has been edited by Broken Wings (edited 03-29-2000).] |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
AVANTI~ so easy to relate........ such a great poem!  -SEA |
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StarrGazer Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679Texas |
Avanti this was great not only know what it means to live in lies but sometimes feel perhaps the biggest lie of all is me "A poet is one who spends a lifetime standing out in thunderstorms, waiting to be hit by lightning" ~Randal Jarrell~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
There’s that memory box in my aching mind... and my heart that pounds...reminds me I’m alive ----------------- I need a moment of truth...that senses belonging I see the fabrication to last eternally... Enigmatically time is ticking...I can’t see it again Out of sight...still in the heart --------------- Your brilliant disguise erases recollection... A sigh of relief...is what we’ve become... Oblivious...you prevail... I’m fine...I have you to thank... ---------------- Avanti...my poetic friend... this is AWESOME!!!!! this is my most fav of yours wow!! its is SO deep and your thoughts are so well written out. this is excellent. truly. take care, jm Do you live by the book, do you play by the rules Do you care what is thought by others about you If this day is all that is promised to you Do you live for the present, the future the past... tracy chapman |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Avanti this is my favourite you've written too!! You dedicated this to many too, I see. It is harrowing, sickening and all the other bad things to live with lies or pretense. Some......never learn. Bravo this was truly wonderful work, well thought out and expressed!  There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
Thankx for understanding ...Sandra ,Broken wings and sea...it's wonderful when people can relate to you... i do feel prowd that you think this is one of my best Isis...and janet too though this one has some sad feelings for me...still...there's always something to smile about  you don't have to understand completely..to love completely... remember even the darkest night has a morning to meet...you'll understand someday..Avanti Rao |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
Such pain brings such forth such beauty of written word. I do understand and know the feelings protrayed here. |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Again you managed to capture a feeling. Very well done Avanti ! |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
well thanx septsong...and munda...gald you liked it If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
I just want to thank you Ruth... I have a lot to learn from you... thanx so much... I can see the differnce... |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Wonderful Avanti Full of feeling and depth. I love this one, I can relate so well. Keep up the great work. Daniel The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship." --Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Dido me to, loved it. Joel. I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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