Dark Poetry #1 |
Moving Past Pain |
SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
This was written with someone here in mind.....for them, not about them! Good morning sunshine Good morning day time to get moving I'm on my way Pushing past the darkness moving away from the pain I'll hide my heart no longer Love is never in vain Your choice~ was to be cruel and cold My choice~ is to be strong and bold Embracing life overflowing love from my heart I'm done hurting~ I have a fresh new start! -SEA- [This message has been edited by SEA (edited 04-10-2000).] |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
I wish I could say that I'm done with the hurt, but I guess I'm not. This is a nice thought, something to work forward to. Joel. Thank you Sea. Joel. |
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Broken Member
since 2000-03-12
Posts 271The woods |
Glad to hear you're feeling this way, great poem to. I wish I felt the same way, and maby someday I'll do. Yours truly ~Broken |
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Caitlin Junior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 15 |
I really liked this poem and I hope I'll find the independence you have soon. I love your work..keep writing |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Oh, to have a day like that. This is wonderful....and give hope Kathleen |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Thanks to Joel,Broken, Caitlin, and Irish Rose for reading and liking. -SEA |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh, SEA~ To sail your waters ... Lovely, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
It is a beautiful day when we can say enough with the pain...I am ready for happiness and love....it takes a certain amount of desire and fortitude. James |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
God truly brought me here. I have left my entire life behind & moved away from the cruelness. And I moved to the side of the land by the sea. For real!!!! Thank you thank you thank you for this poem.. i say these things to myself EVERY DAY!!!!!!! i feel like publishers don't know anything about poetry. they need to come to places like this. God Bless!!!! |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
hey thanx!!! i should read that every morning...may then i'll stop cribbing... see ya later...i have a print out to take... If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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NamelessOne Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 197Biloxi MS |
Great poem,full of hope and positive energy. I liked this one a lot |
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ZuMBLe Junior Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 33 |
I love it.. I don't know who it was written for.. But that describes me so well. Dealing with the pain of giving so much love and getting nothing back. Goodmorning Sunshine Goodmorning day.. this poem definately picked up my spirits.. thank you. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marge~thank you! James~ thanks for reading Kynder~ I'm so glad you liked this Avanti~ you're welcome! Happy you liked this NamelessOne~ thank you ZuMBLe~ thank you, I'm happy you liked this! -SEA |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Wonderful Sea. I love reading yours. One day I'll move past it as well, one day soon The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship." --Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Dhuron~ thank you that is so sweet, I hope you can move past it...-SEA |
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