Dark Poetry #1 |
26 Pages... |
a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392 |
26 Pages into the depths of my darkness... p.1 My beliefs of what I am and what I will be. p.2 A deeper look inside of me. p.3 Words that I exist by. p.4 Precious things that make me cry. p.5 Others that accept me as I am. p.6 Simple statements with no shame. p.7 A step further into my darkness. p.8 I am as I am, I confess. p.9 A toast the the liquid that sustains my life. p.10 A bitch to those that scream at me with strife. p.11 Places to seek and learn of vampires. p.12 Things that fan my souls deepest fires. p.13 Words screaming silently from my soul. p.14 Scar tissue that covers every bleeding hole. p.15 The pain. p.16 My deamons that rear thier heads again and again. p.17 Things that keep me sane. p.18 Streakes upon my face that leave thier memories in a red stain. p.19 Glimpses of my pale face. p.20 My humanity: there is a trace. p.21 Questions of my kind. p.22 Random thoughts that dance through my mind. p.23 Writs that bleed. p.24 The story of how I feed the need. p.25 My harshness. p.26 Summery of the 26 pages that lead into the depths of my darkness. There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul... a-alibaster |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
I loved how you did this one. Great!! I really like page 10 Daniel The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship." --Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
very original & creative form. excellent job!!! quote: |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
A-Alibaster~ this is sooo creative! I too really like #10 -SEA |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
I've got to say kid that I liked #1 But all of it put together, rates a 5 howwwlller from me, that's as high as I go, after that they call the cops. hahaha Joel. I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Hope, tears, and renewal Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 74 |
this was great, and I loved the unique form it was in... keep writing! |
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