Dark Poetry #1 |
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Absence of devotion.... |
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The Jackal Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 426Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A |
So i admit i got lost among emotions and i repent..the absence of devotion and i have spent the 19 years living within reason..thriving and leaving im a watcher..i live in wait proving and accusing everyone of making..all my honest mistakes |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Oh hon, I don't believe this of you, you seem sensitive to me. Harsh on yourself? Anyways, great work ![]() There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Broken Wings Member
since 2000-03-18
Posts 157Miami, FL. |
Don't beat yourself up, we are only human....as long as we learn from our mistakes then everything will be ok. WELL DONE ![]() take care, Broken Wings "As you learn and grow, you will realize the greater the pain, the greater the growth." -IYANLA VANZANT |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
this was a very good little piece. but you can't be all bad if you can recognize and admit your faults. ![]() that is when one leaves themselves open for change. |
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