Dark Poetry #1 |
Absence of devotion.... |
The Jackal Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 426Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A |
So i admit i got lost among emotions and i repent..the absence of devotion and i have spent the 19 years living within reason..thriving and leaving im a watcher..i live in wait proving and accusing everyone of making..all my honest mistakes |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Oh hon, I don't believe this of you, you seem sensitive to me. Harsh on yourself? Anyways, great work There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Broken Wings Member
since 2000-03-18
Posts 157Miami, FL. |
Don't beat yourself up, we are only human....as long as we learn from our mistakes then everything will be ok. WELL DONE take care, Broken Wings "As you learn and grow, you will realize the greater the pain, the greater the growth." -IYANLA VANZANT |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
this was a very good little piece. but you can't be all bad if you can recognize and admit your faults. that is when one leaves themselves open for change. |
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