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The Jackal
Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 426
Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A

0 posted 2000-03-28 11:56 PM


So i admit i got lost among emotions
and i
repent..the absence of devotion
and i have spent the 19 years
living within reason..thriving and leaving
im a watcher..i live in wait
proving and accusing
everyone of making..all my honest mistakes


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Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 2000-03-29 12:03 PM


Oh hon, I don't believe this of you, you seem sensitive to me.  Harsh on yourself?
Anyways, great work  

 There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



Broken Wings
Member
since 2000-03-18
Posts 157
Miami, FL.
2 posted 2000-03-29 01:12 AM


Don't beat yourself up, we are only human....as long as we learn from our mistakes then everything will be ok.  WELL DONE  


take care,
Broken Wings


 "As you learn and grow, you will realize the greater the pain, the greater the growth."
-IYANLA VANZANT


danni
Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688
wisconsin
3 posted 2000-03-29 01:41 AM


this was a very good little piece. but you can't be all bad if you can recognize and admit your faults.  
that is when one leaves themselves open for change.

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