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Hope, tears, and renewal Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 74 |
We come together, To join in a quest, To find the eternal truth... But no one ever told us, They never said, Always said, Did they say? They never told us who we were They never said it would be hard, So hard. They never told us what our losses would be. Yet still, we are here, We are on this quest. Is it too late? It's too late to ask. For we have been bound, Bound by the search for the truth. The truth which we may never find And yet we can't help but look for... Come, my friends, join the quest. |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
First and Foremost Welcome To Dark Passions, They never told us who we were They never said it would be hard, So hard. They never told us what our losses would be. Yet still, we are here, We are on this quest. Is it too late? It's too late to ask. I like those lines, it intriques me...and I will join you in the quest. welcome again Daniel The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship." --Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
nice. i liked the conversational tone of this piece, just like sitting in a room, speaking lovely words. welcome! hope to see more! jann elizabeth Love is so short, and forgetting so long. -Pablo Neruda |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Excellent poem Hope...welcome to dark passions. Yours truly, Angel< !signature--> "The dark weight of the hour humming madly filling my head with blood and sorrow and dread the executioner's song." -Jewel "The Dark Bells" ~*Angel of Darkness*~ [This message has been edited by Dark Enchantress (edited 03-28-2000).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Welcome to Dark Passions Hope, The Quest can be long and hard, but we must never give up. . . the rewards are too great and the experience will help us to be better people. . . ---------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Welcome Hope. I agree too, some of us are already on our quests, but we can all go forth together, come on, take my hand, Sven too, anyone else??  There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Don't forget me Isis... LOL  I will gladly follow you two great poets The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship." --Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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Broken Wings Member
since 2000-03-18
Posts 157Miami, FL. |
LEAD THE WAY. EXCELLENT! take care Broken Wings "As you learn and grow, you will realize the greater the pain, the greater the growth." -IYANLA VANZANT |
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Aiden Kelly Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 148Ft. Wayne, IN USA |
i really like the way you've done this! a quest with no direction but a journey that must be taken...learning from others, always persevering. very well done. welcome to passions! |
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CrEaTuRe Member
since 2000-01-01
Posts 260Kuala Lumpur,Malaysia |
Excellent piece of work dear hope to see more of it here  by the way,Welcome to Passion and DP |
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ShadowHeart Junior Member
since 2000-03-25
Posts 49 |
Great poem! you did a real great job describing our common past time, didn't you. j/k...anyways, great job... Love is our greatest weakness but when it's found, it's our greatest strength. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Hope~ Welcome! Such a great poem. I liked the way it made me think -SEA |
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