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dhuron
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since 2000-03-19
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0 posted 2000-03-28 06:59 PM


Unrequited Love
Painful, Destructive
My mind remembers
all the chances I had

Regret and Sorrow
Broken, I let you go
Falling Apart
can’t go on

Only If I
said those words
I Love You
If only...

Don’t look back
It hurts too much
my heart is broken
I let you go

You found happiness
I have no one
will my pain
ever cease?

© Copyright 2000 Daniel Huron - All Rights Reserved
Dark Enchantress
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1 posted 2000-03-28 07:03 PM


Wonderful poem dhuron....I know what you're feeling...and I can tell you this much...with time your pain will heal and you'll be happy too. By writing this poem and expressing this...you're freeing yourself even if only a little. Learn from this experience and be patient...you will be granted the chance to love again.

             Yours truly,
                Angel
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 "The dark weight of the hour
humming madly
filling my head
with blood
and sorrow
and dread
the executioner's song."
-Jewel
"The Dark Bells"

~*Angel of Darkness*~




[This message has been edited by Dark Enchantress (edited 03-28-2000).]

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2 posted 2000-03-29 05:08 PM


Dhuron~ Excellent! Oh, echos in my heart! Love this one!   -SEA
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3 posted 2000-03-29 05:09 PM


Wow... awesome poem... I can feel your pain.
Isis
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4 posted 2000-03-29 06:49 PM


I know the injustice of these feelings, you will find your niche' soon my friend.  Then you'll wonder what all the fuss was about!!  

 There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



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