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Virgo
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since 2000-03-27
Posts 46
tx

0 posted 2000-03-27 05:16 PM



Blinded by love is what I've been
Forgetting who I am and what my needs are....
For You!!!

The hardest part is reality setting in.
No more thinking with my heart...
The mind has taken over.

How can it be that a four letter word
could have such an impact on someone's life?

A four letter word that can heal as well
as hurt...

Such a powerful meaning behind a four letter word.


[This message has been edited by Virgo (edited 03-29-2000).]

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dhuron
Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476

1 posted 2000-03-27 05:23 PM


Welcome to DP Virgo.  Good first post.

~A four letter word that can heal as well
as hurt...~

yes hurting and healing, it is a great mystery.

~Such a powerful meaning behind a four letter word.~

don't forget that line, it is so true.

StarryEyed
Junior Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 20
Florida
2 posted 2000-03-27 05:29 PM


I love how right you are about 'that four letter word'.  It is strange how much impact it has isnt it?

 It takes a minute to give your heart away,
It takes as second for it to break.
It takes a lifetime to forget that special someone,
And the impact that they make.

Dark Enchantress
Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258
meet Morgana
3 posted 2000-03-27 05:55 PM


Welcome to Dark Passions Virgo...this is a great first post. I know what you mean by this post but love's power goes far beyond the depths of any mortal soul....it's good to have a grip on reality...but also remember to enjoy it's beauty.

              Yours truly,
                 Angel


 "The dark weight of the hour
humming madly
filling my head
with blood
and sorrow
and dread
the executioner's song."
-Jewel
"The Dark Bells"

~*Angel of Darkness*~



Walter Poe
Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787

4 posted 2000-03-28 05:02 AM


A good point love is just another 4 letter word

the most powerful word

Humanity is freed and imprisoned by it

All the word is pain happiness death life rebirth from the word.

for it was their in the begining and it will be their at the end.

  Did you write the Book of Love
And do you have faith in God above
If the Bible tells you so
Do you believe in rock 'n roll
Can music save your mortal soul
And can you teach me how to dance real slow


Sandra Cox
Junior Member
since 2000-03-24
Posts 48
Essex, London,UK
5 posted 2000-03-28 01:45 PM


Great feelings, I can relate to them definately.  True, Love is a four letter word but so are all the bad words that go with it like hurt, pain and loss. Other more postive ones though are free, calm, luck and good!  All the best.

Sandra

SEA
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676
with you
6 posted 2000-03-28 04:48 PM


Virgo~ Welcome!   Your poem is strong yet full of hurt. I really can relate. Little words usually pack the biggest punch! -SEA
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
7 posted 2000-03-28 06:00 PM


Welcome Virgo!!  Wonderful first post!  That four letter word is one I wouldn't dream of living without!!  

 There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



Jannel
Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492
Muncie, IN, USA
8 posted 2000-03-28 06:44 PM


love, ah, what a word. it can mean so much, differetn things at different times and to different people. excellent work. welcome.

jann elizabeth

 Love is so short, and forgetting so long.
-Pablo Neruda

Hope, tears, and renewal
Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 74

9 posted 2000-03-28 08:47 PM


Great poem... love *is* the hardest four letter word of all...
Virgo
Junior Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 46
tx
10 posted 2000-03-29 03:02 PM


Thank you all for your support.  I don't consider myself a poet...writing is something I've always done to help ease any stress in my life that I have been dealing with...again, thank you.

[This message has been edited by Virgo (edited 03-29-2000).]

Aiden Kelly
Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 148
Ft. Wayne, IN USA
11 posted 2000-03-29 06:54 PM


that four letter word is all important, isn't it?  it can make and break.  very well done.  welcome to passions!  
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