Dark Poetry #1 |
Four Letter Word |
Virgo Junior Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 46tx |
Blinded by love is what I've been Forgetting who I am and what my needs are.... For You!!! The hardest part is reality setting in. No more thinking with my heart... The mind has taken over. How can it be that a four letter word could have such an impact on someone's life? A four letter word that can heal as well as hurt... Such a powerful meaning behind a four letter word. [This message has been edited by Virgo (edited 03-29-2000).] |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Welcome to DP Virgo. Good first post. ~A four letter word that can heal as well as hurt...~ yes hurting and healing, it is a great mystery. ~Such a powerful meaning behind a four letter word.~ don't forget that line, it is so true. |
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StarryEyed Junior Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 20Florida |
I love how right you are about 'that four letter word'. It is strange how much impact it has isnt it? It takes a minute to give your heart away, It takes as second for it to break. It takes a lifetime to forget that special someone, And the impact that they make. |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Welcome to Dark Passions Virgo...this is a great first post. I know what you mean by this post but love's power goes far beyond the depths of any mortal soul....it's good to have a grip on reality...but also remember to enjoy it's beauty. Yours truly, Angel "The dark weight of the hour humming madly filling my head with blood and sorrow and dread the executioner's song." -Jewel "The Dark Bells" ~*Angel of Darkness*~ |
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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
A good point love is just another 4 letter word the most powerful word Humanity is freed and imprisoned by it All the word is pain happiness death life rebirth from the word. for it was their in the begining and it will be their at the end. Did you write the Book of Love And do you have faith in God above If the Bible tells you so Do you believe in rock 'n roll Can music save your mortal soul And can you teach me how to dance real slow |
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Sandra Cox Junior Member
since 2000-03-24
Posts 48Essex, London,UK |
Great feelings, I can relate to them definately. True, Love is a four letter word but so are all the bad words that go with it like hurt, pain and loss. Other more postive ones though are free, calm, luck and good! All the best. Sandra |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Virgo~ Welcome! Your poem is strong yet full of hurt. I really can relate. Little words usually pack the biggest punch! -SEA |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Welcome Virgo!! Wonderful first post! That four letter word is one I wouldn't dream of living without!! There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
love, ah, what a word. it can mean so much, differetn things at different times and to different people. excellent work. welcome. jann elizabeth Love is so short, and forgetting so long. -Pablo Neruda |
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Hope, tears, and renewal Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 74 |
Great poem... love *is* the hardest four letter word of all... |
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Virgo Junior Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 46tx |
Thank you all for your support. I don't consider myself a poet...writing is something I've always done to help ease any stress in my life that I have been dealing with...again, thank you. [This message has been edited by Virgo (edited 03-29-2000).] |
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Aiden Kelly Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 148Ft. Wayne, IN USA |
that four letter word is all important, isn't it? it can make and break. very well done. welcome to passions! |
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