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Carson E. G. Smith
New Member

since 2000-03-27

Posts 6
Newfoundland, Canada

0 posted 2000-03-27 04:31 AM

Angel of Darkness

Her hair is like the color of a crow,
Her face as pale as milk,
Her voice is like the creaking of a door,
But yet I know I love her.

Her body is shaped like the handle of a broom,
Her hands are used more than the average hands,
Her eyes are sad and filled with tears,
But yet I know I love her.

Why do I love this image of death?
Her being is filled with darkness,
Could I be next in the book of death?
But yet I know I love her.

Her mind is filled with the troubles of the world,
Her heart is filled with sorrow,
She knows that her time on earth is short,
Will she live to see tomorrow?

She haunts my moral being,
She fills my heart with fear,
And when I see my image in her eyes,
She seems to draw me near.

She is the angel of darkness,
She brings with her peace of mind,
And although her appearance is deathly,
Her heart is very kind.

She does not like what she has to do,
But she must bring you out of the light,
There is no need to try and fight,
Just close your eyes – and say good night!

-Carson Edward George Smith

dhuron
Member

since 2000-03-19

Posts 476

1 posted 2000-03-27 06:39 AM

Great Poem Carson, I really like these lines:

She is the angel of darkness,
She brings with her peace of mind,
And although her appearance is deathly,
Her heart is very kind.

Keep up the great work

Dhuron

StarrGazer
Senior Member

since 2000-03-05

Posts 679
Texas

2 posted 2000-03-27 08:45 AM

great poem ...vivid imagery good job !!! Welcome to Dark Passions

"A poet is one who spends a lifetime standing out in thunderstorms, waiting to be hit by lightning"
~Randal Jarrell~

Walter Poe
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 787

3 posted 2000-03-27 10:17 AM

i hope this person isnt as ill as she sounds

darkness and desperation

Did you write the Book of Love
And do you have faith in God above
If the Bible tells you so
Do you believe in rock 'n roll
Can music save your mortal soul
And can you teach me how to dance real slow

Jannel
Member

since 2000-01-18

Posts 492
Muncie, IN, USA

4 posted 2000-03-27 01:37 PM

beautiful work. great use of repitition. welcome. i look forward to reading more.
jannel

Dont wake the dead,
Wake the dying,
Don't change what you've said,
Change what you're saying.

Dark Enchantress
Senior Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 1258
meet Morgana

5 posted 2000-03-27 03:53 PM

First of all I'd like to welcome you to Dark Passions. I hope you come to like it here as much as we do. Secondly I'd like commend you on such a wonderful poem. I hope there will be more to come.

Yours truly,
Angel

"The dark weight of the hour
humming madly
filling my head
with blood
and sorrow
and dread
the executioner's song."
-Jewel
"The Dark Bells"

~*Angel of Darkness*~

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

6 posted 2000-03-27 10:42 PM

Great First piece Carson!! And welcome to Passions and the dark forum.

There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)

Aiden Kelly
Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 148
Ft. Wayne, IN USA

7 posted 2000-03-28 02:19 AM

nice work carson!

welcome to passions! love the intense description of this angel of darkness...well done.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

8 posted 2000-03-28 04:40 PM

Carson~ Welcome! Wow, this is great! Such a vivid picture of the angel of death. I never pictured that angel being female. I do now.-SEA

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