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Veil_Gypsy Junior Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 44Trapped in Veils of Starlight, and happy to be on my cosmic trail |
Entangled Everyday she makes her bed All neat all whole All is in place and well under control Everyone else's to own for a day Good little christen girl, so much more then the last great innocent Needs they twisted approval Cannot function with out her drug That is everyone else's thoughts of her The cats cradle she weaves is twisting in her head Lilly white satin, angels feathers plucked Wings matted down with sorrow, Pretending to be upright by her holy illuminations So fragile is she Putting up her walls of defense To give the grand and impenetrable appearance of Aloof perfection Though to be perfect is deadly, and take care of this I hurt like you I bleed more then you My blood is not your savior My flesh is not your tool I would gladly take the Pandoraian side All the precious things her left unsaid Surrounded with a false sense of love Yet she is so alone in the embrace of others She can speck so kindly yet bitterness is at her tongue To touch winter and her eyes are the chill of frost I'm choking on all of this She plays the piano, really sweetly with a touch of melancholy She so good at her masquerade of masks A phantom of phantoms She extends her arms out to Nails adore She can fold so...perfectly Look of innocent She can fold away her heart And can put away her crown of joy So Domesticated She is like a cat in the dark and then she is your darkness....she rules her life like a bird in flight...Bard Gypsy |
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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
I enjoyed this two sides of one person public and private what you show and what you know very impressive Did you write the Book of Love And do you have faith in God above If the Bible tells you so Do you believe in rock 'n roll Can music save your mortal soul And can you teach me how to dance real slow |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Good, I liked how you showed how others view her and how she really is. Great Job The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship." --Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Well Done, interesting perspectives!! So you're back to the velvet underground... thanks for saying my Emerald Forest was reminiscent of Ms. Stevie Nicks, I take that as a compliment, I like her writings..  There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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