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| Dark Poetry #1 |
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To the Muse of Tragedy |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
Melpomene must you afflict the weaving of my days with the unforgiving touch of one who drinks sorrow Implore the Fates on my behalf to pluck their hues from dewdrops from sunshine and to discontinue that dreadful scarlet and the color or night as these colors are not en vogue for this season of my life Melpomene diminish your dominion over the frail strands of my existence before Atropos s n i p s [This message has been edited by Jannel (edited 03-24-2000).] |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
WOW!! This one is powerful and full of darkness and mystery. Bravo!  There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
excellent jannel...perfect presentation too...very good work. take care, jm Do you live by the book, do you play by the rules Do you care what is thought by others about you If this day is all that is promised to you Do you live for the present, the future the past... tracy chapman |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Jannel, Wow...loved the form here. Excellent!!! Very powerful indeed. Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
thank you all for your kind words. for anyone unfamiliar with greek myth- melpomene is the muse of tragedy, and atropos is one of the three fates, who weave the thread of our lives. atropos cuts the thread of life at its end. |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
this piece was great. i enjoyed it very much! i love too much, and not enough. |
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Veil_Gypsy Junior Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 44Trapped in Veils of Starlight, and happy to be on my cosmic trail |
"must you afflict the weaving of my days with the unforgiving touch" My word did I ever enjoy this poem it was smashing it had all the elements of story rhym and verse....lovely simply lovely dear!! smashing good show keep it up!! Love Always  The Gypsy Bard She is like a cat in the dark and then she is your darkness....she rules her life like a bird in flight...Bard Gypsy |
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