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Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

0 posted 2000-03-27 12:46 PM


Dark and forbiding now,
You are a stranger to me,
Cold and alone,
No comfort, nor hope do I see.

Rank and stale, putrid speciality,
Tempests endured almost daily,
Saddened, perhaps never to laugh again,
Only darkness, my dim reality.

Obscurity in the shade,
So many mistakes made,
Happiness now forbidden,
On the wings of darkness you've ridden.

My lifeforce now dims so low,
Don't know if it can last another round,
Listening for beauty soft and low,
It echoes in the stillness, a happy sound.

Karma returns at will,
He WILL dole out his just rewards,
By the power of three times three,
You'll finally see, you'll finally see!


 There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



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Michael
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since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
1 posted 2000-03-27 02:24 AM


Three times three!  Wow...strong poem, isis.

loved it.

michael

dhuron
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since 2000-03-19
Posts 476

2 posted 2000-03-27 09:16 AM


WOW

Isis, this poem is beyond words...such power...wow..


daniel

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2000-03-27 03:13 PM


I'm looking forward to the day that your heart will be out of this dark and forbidding place...strong feelings and desires are being revealed.   James
Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
4 posted 2000-03-27 06:49 PM


Thanks Michael, Daniel and James  

 There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

5 posted 2000-03-27 10:01 PM


excellent poem ISIS powerful and speaks of your truths and strenght...KARMA is an awesome force..and paybacks are hell
take care, jm

 Do you live by the book, do you play by the rules
Do you care what is thought by others about you
If this day is all that is promised to you
Do you live for the present, the future the past...
tracy chapman


Sven
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since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA
6 posted 2000-03-28 10:40 PM


You get what you give. . . power that rings true today. . .

Fight the good fight, my frined. . .

-------------------------------------------------------

 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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