Dark Poetry #1 |
Dark and Forbiding |
Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Dark and forbiding now, You are a stranger to me, Cold and alone, No comfort, nor hope do I see. Rank and stale, putrid speciality, Tempests endured almost daily, Saddened, perhaps never to laugh again, Only darkness, my dim reality. Obscurity in the shade, So many mistakes made, Happiness now forbidden, On the wings of darkness you've ridden. My lifeforce now dims so low, Don't know if it can last another round, Listening for beauty soft and low, It echoes in the stillness, a happy sound. Karma returns at will, He WILL dole out his just rewards, By the power of three times three, You'll finally see, you'll finally see! There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Three times three! Wow...strong poem, isis. loved it. michael |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
WOW Isis, this poem is beyond words...such power...wow.. daniel |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I'm looking forward to the day that your heart will be out of this dark and forbidding place...strong feelings and desires are being revealed. James |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Thanks Michael, Daniel and James There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
excellent poem ISIS powerful and speaks of your truths and strenght...KARMA is an awesome force..and paybacks are hell take care, jm Do you live by the book, do you play by the rules Do you care what is thought by others about you If this day is all that is promised to you Do you live for the present, the future the past... tracy chapman |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
You get what you give. . . power that rings true today. . . Fight the good fight, my frined. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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