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Veil_Gypsy
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since 2000-03-27
Posts 44
Trapped in Veils of Starlight, and happy to be on my cosmic trail

0 posted 2000-03-28 08:23 AM


To The Woman forgotten

Sit alone in your cell of fear
So afraid to break the spell of loneliness
perhaps some unknown prince has left you bitter

A woman left to rot in her own cynic way
To be cold to the touch of love
To back away from any sign of affection

This is the woman of shadows
Left alone forgotten
She hears a merry jig
Yet her feet are dead to rhythm

No longer caring to converse with the living
She sits in hollow halls with the fates
weaving her web of love lost and things of the nature

Perhaps you know of her
She is out of reach to your rosy beams
leave her be to the shadows

The Cosmic-widow of ages


 She is like a cat in the dark and then she is your darkness....she rules her life like a bird in flight...Bard Gypsy

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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2000-03-28 08:42 AM


She is not forgotten..for someday her heart will soften once again and she will come out of the shadows.   James
Jannel
Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492
Muncie, IN, USA
2 posted 2000-03-28 12:01 PM


'yet her feet are dead to the rhythm' i loved that line. this was beautifully sad. i love the way you use words.

jann elizabeth

 Love is so short, and forgetting so long.
-Pablo Neruda

danni
Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688
wisconsin
3 posted 2000-03-29 01:29 AM


i know these words well. it describes the way i was for years. and reminds me of how glad i am that i am not there anymore. well done.

 i love too much, and not enough.

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