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Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

0 posted 2000-03-26 07:38 PM


Another day dawns of emotional comatose,
Another day lonely and alone,
So quiet she hears every indrawn breathe,
So empty, her heart no longer beating, merely a stone.

She never deserved this,
All who look see her loving heart,
Was this torture her destiny?
Was she earmarked from the start?

Her mind again leaves her locality,
It roams both far and wide,
Today she'll visit Byron Bay,
She turns, and looks, it's happiness by her side.

With warm words of comfort,
With a deep, appealing laugh,
Here there is no pain,
Here she's never given the shaft.

She just enjoys his company,
They talk of many things,
The hills and grasses in tune with them,
And the happiness they bring.

Though time and space seperate them,
She still feels him by her side,
And into his strong, loving arms she runs,
In him she can laugh, be free and confide.

If she keeps her eyes closed,
And concentrates with her all,
Perhaps her dream will become reality,
Her baird, friend and kindred will catch her if she falls.....

Dream on sister,
For that's all you've got,
Dream on little one,
With those dreams you can stop the rot...


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 There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)




[This message has been edited by Isis (edited 03-26-2000).]

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Sandra Cox
Junior Member
since 2000-03-24
Posts 48
Essex, London,UK
1 posted 2000-03-26 07:43 PM


Great poem again!  Such feeling in every line.  

Sandra

Dream_Cloud
Junior Member
since 2000-03-25
Posts 10
Daytona Beach, FL USA
2 posted 2000-03-26 07:48 PM


Oh wow, Isis...I love this! It's so inspirational! Thanx for the comments on my first poem, by the way, and thanx for making me feel welcome!
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
3 posted 2000-03-26 08:20 PM


Thanks Sandra and Dream Cloud  


 There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



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