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Isis
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0 posted 2000-03-23 01:14 AM


I loved you before I knew you,
Loved you from the day we had first contact,
Two souls united with similar dreams,
Destined as friends always, so it seems.

Across the spans of space and time,
You speak to my heart in song and rhyme,
Reminding me of all that I am,
Lending courage to the sacrifical lamb.

I feel your hands supporting me,
Fingers entwined across the seas,
Always there with comfort and love,
A gift to me a gift from above.

I only hope it's the same for you,
That I'm always there when you feel blue,
That you truly know you're never alone,
With love like ours no need to atone.

Together well face all life's challenges,
Together we'll share laughter and tears,
Together we'll blaze new trails in our life,
Together we'll face life's pain and strife.

Just look in your heart,
See and feel the love of which I speak,
Thankyou for blessing my life,
Between kindred true peace we seek..

I'll always be there for you,
As you've been for me,
Whenever your feeling low,
Look in your heart and you'll see.



 There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



© Copyright 2000 Isis - All Rights Reserved
StarrGazer
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1 posted 2000-03-23 02:31 AM


WOW this was beautiful great job!!!

 "A poet is one who spends a lifetime standing out in thunderstorms, waiting to be hit by lightning"
~Randal Jarrell~



Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
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2 posted 2000-03-23 10:23 AM


Lucky lucky kindred...beautiful poem of undying devotion Isis...your sweetest song  
take care, jm

 and you can say baby...
baby can I hold you tonight
maybe if told you the right words...
at the right time,
you'd be mine...
baby can I hold you tonight...
tracy chapman



kaile
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3 posted 2000-03-23 11:58 AM


LOL..this is love even before first sight ")

i really like the reference to the lamb...original idea!! ")

Isis
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4 posted 2000-03-23 06:00 PM


Glad you all liked it thanks!!  

 There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



Broken Wings
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since 2000-03-18
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Miami, FL.
5 posted 2000-03-23 07:01 PM


I LOVED IT!!! EXCELLENT!!

i'm sending this one as an ecard. THANKS!


take care,
Broken Wings  


 "As you learn and grow, you will realize the greater the pain, the greater the growth."
-IYANLA VANZANT



Isis
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6 posted 2000-03-23 08:02 PM


Thanks SOOOO much Broken Wings that is the best compliment a poet can get!!  Isis is smiling and proud now.  Thanks   < !signature-->

 There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)




[This message has been edited by Isis (edited 03-23-2000).]

Sven
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7 posted 2000-03-24 12:04 PM


"I'll always be there for you,
As you've been for me,
Whenever your feeling low,
Look in your heart and you'll see."

Isis. . . how could I not?  I'll always see. . . and I'll always be thankful for you and your friendship and kindness. . .

This was truly one of the best things that you have written. . . you have made my day. . . thank you my kindred. . .

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Isis
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8 posted 2000-03-24 12:07 PM


Glad you liked it so much hon, and it made your day.  I figured you'd need a lift tonight!!    *hugs*

 There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



Sven
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9 posted 2000-03-24 12:29 PM


Thank you hon, you always do know how to make me feel better, don't you?

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Isis
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10 posted 2000-03-25 01:51 AM


I try... *blush*

 There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



Sven
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11 posted 2000-03-25 01:53 AM


You do quite well. . .


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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl



[This message has been edited by Sven (edited 03-25-2000).]

Isis
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12 posted 2000-03-25 01:56 AM


Goodnight Hon *hugs*

 There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



Sandra Cox
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since 2000-03-24
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Essex, London,UK
13 posted 2000-03-26 06:38 PM


A wonderful poem written by someone so obviously in love.  Love's a wonderful thing when you have it and a nightmare when you lose it!

Best Wishes

Sandra

Isis
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14 posted 2000-03-26 07:09 PM


Sandra thanks but we are not in love, we love as friends and kindred.  Such a special relationship, a talisman when times are hard.
One who always understands...

 There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



ShadowHeart
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since 2000-03-25
Posts 49

15 posted 2000-03-26 08:04 PM


Great poem!!  It really describes how I feel sometimes...

 Love is our greatest weakness
but when it's found,
it's our greatest strength.

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