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dhuron
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since 2000-03-19
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0 posted 2000-03-26 12:46 PM


Rain Pouring
Thunder clapping
Lighting Flashing
Such Peace.

The Thunder,
So Musical
Playing a special tune
Alluring as the Siren’s song

The Lighting,
Violent and Calming
Crashing into the ground
Ravishing The Darkened Sky

Calling out to Me,
Worshipping The Act
Outside; skyclad.
Rain, covering my body

Nearer the lighting
comes, I feel it’s pull
I hear it’s call
I see it’s beauty

The Thunder Grows louder
The Lighting brighter
Rain pours
Dancing Arcs in the sky

Such Eloquence
Dancing in rhythm
Moving Closer to me
Oh so very close........


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JOY 14
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since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA
1 posted 2000-03-26 12:41 PM


dhuron,
I liked how at first you might get the feeling of rage from the thunder and lightning, but then you describe how peaceful a thunderstorm can be and how beautiful.  I agree!  

Joy

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 2000-03-26 08:24 PM


I love storms too!!  Like an emotional symphony in the sky.  Wonderous!  I never tire of them.  You described it beautifully  

 There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



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