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For anyone who has ever loved...........
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For anyone who has ever loved........... |
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Sandra Cox Junior Member
since 2000-03-24
Posts 48Essex, London,UK |
The Power of Love..... It has a power that is second to none Far more than any battle fought and won It takes control and before you know You have come across your greatest foe It makes you lose all sense of reason It has no care for time or season A sickness this could seem to be A cancer that no medic will see Your mind is controlled and thinks no more You cannot function that's for sure Its frightening and strikes out of the blue You're not even sure how it got to you But it found a flaw in your body and struck You'll look for a cure but there's no such luck For now its got you and reeled you in You're on to a loser and never can win A logical thought is a thing of the past But the feeling is good and surely can't last Just thinking of them can make you feel sick Then back to reality well that was quick Its a power game between heart and head A path that sometimes is tricky to tread Your heart says yes but your head says no You're so confused but which way do you go The things in life that were so easy to do Are no longer the ones important to you To be with that person no matter the cost Forgetting the price or whatever you've lost Its the strongest emotion a human can feel And when it hits you you'll know when its real But if you should fail to keep this heart Then you will learn the hardest part Its not a feeling turned off like a tap You'll know you are lost but there isn't a map The pain in your heart will go on forever It doesn't go away and the hurt leaves you never Even when they give you a reason for hate You cannot do it they were still your best mate And as the years pass you on by There are still the times when you want to cry For once love is given and surely meant There's a niche in your heart from where is went It cannot be filled and never ignored For that would mean you are truly flawed You just have to store these feelings for now Its a difficult process but you'll learn how And then you can move on within your life These feelings no longer fill you with strife So listen to your head and love with care You don't know how long this person will be there Don't take a chance if the risk seems high Listen to your head when it asks you why If you're lucky to love and find the best Then you won't need to put this to the test You can survive eternity happy with your mate Sure that everything is not all down to fate The moral of this tale is easy to tell Once you have suffered you know it well Love with care and if your heart rules your head Listen to you brain and let that rule instead! Sandra Cox x |
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StarryEyed Junior Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 20Florida |
Great first post!  you captured love and heartbreak really well. I cant wait to read more by you. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Welcome to the dark forum Sandra. You did a great job with this, descirbing love this way is no small feat!! Bravo  There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Bronx Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 84Oviedo, Florida, U.S. |
hey- WOW! This was a very very good 1st post. Heck this was good for ne post! I loved it from beginning to the end! bye Bronx Be careful! It's a jungle out there! |
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Dream_Cloud Junior Member
since 2000-03-25
Posts 10Daytona Beach, FL USA |
Hey- great work! It's so true, the conflict between your heart and head! Use wisdom in love...it's beautiful! |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
WOW! What can I say except this is truly excellent...and beyond. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful writing..yes love does possess lots of power. James |
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Virgo Junior Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 46tx |
the hardest part is thinking with your mind instead of your heart. If that was so easy, there wouldn't be heartache....great poem. |
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Broken Member
since 2000-03-12
Posts 271The woods |
Welcome to Dark Passions. Great first post! I look forward to read more from you. I`m running out of time, I`m out of step and closing down, I never sleep for wanting hours the empty hours of greed. And uselessly always the need to feel again the real belief, of something more than mockery. If only I could fill my heart with love. -Robert Smith |
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kris New Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 3 |
"You cannot function that's for sure." Here I thought I was one of the few staring at my ceiling at 3:00am wondering why I couldn't close the emptiness inside. Good job. |
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Aiden Kelly Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 148Ft. Wayne, IN USA |
i like the style of this...has a "moral tale" quality to it (like chaucer)! welcome to passions! great poem! understand those images very well... |
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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
What can i say Walter says Hi This is a great poem full of what love can be I certainly recognise much of this poem from my own life. Very beautiful Did you write the Book of Love And do you have faith in God above If the Bible tells you so Do you believe in rock 'n roll Can music save your mortal soul And can you teach me how to dance real slow |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sandra~ Welcome! This is a wonderful poem. Love is tricky stuff!  -SEA |
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Sandra Cox Junior Member
since 2000-03-24
Posts 48Essex, London,UK |
Thank you all so much for all your kind words and for welcoming me to your family. I am so pleased that I decided to join this wonderful group! Love Sandra |
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Angel Usagi Junior Member
since 2000-03-29
Posts 11 |
Too true. Too true. ~*Angel Usagi*~ |
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CrEaTuRe Member
since 2000-01-01
Posts 260Kuala Lumpur,Malaysia |
a;; has been said all i can do is give you a great warm *hug* welcome to the family dear  |
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