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Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

0 posted 2000-03-25 02:02 AM

Another lonely night
Is it really worth the fight?
Her heart longs to take flight
To share with him her love this night

Another lonely day
Why does it have to be this way?
He makes her heart smile and feel gay
She misses him more than she can say

Another lonely night
Will she ever see the light?
He understands her heart's plight
The flame of his love burning strong and bright

Another lonely day
Why does she have to pay?
His face her sun's only ray
She longs to be with him, laughing by the bay

Another lonely day
Another lonely night
Near his heart she longs to stay
To keep this feeling, oh so right

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-03-25 10:44 AM

*SIGH*

beautiful poem of longing and devotion... and I'll bet I know just which poems in here...inspired this one...

very sweet and full of your tender heart Sven
take care, jm

Do you live by the book, do you play by the rules
Do you care what is thought by others about you
If this day is all that is promised to you
Do you live for the present, the future the past...
tracy chapman

Aiden Kelly
Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 148
Ft. Wayne, IN USA

2 posted 2000-03-25 05:45 PM

"love makes the heart grow fonder"...or simply sadder. very well written...loneliness is a powerful feeling and you've captured that feeling of longing so well!

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

3 posted 2000-03-25 08:10 PM

i love the way this poem rhymes....l iove rhyming poems...do u have more?

")

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

4 posted 2000-03-26 07:17 PM

Thanks Sven, she longs for her given right of happiness, peace non ending, joy, laughter, music and song, and someone to share it all with, all along. She is a tragic sole isn't she? Thanks *hugs*

There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)

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