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Walter Poe
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since 1999-10-13
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0 posted 2000-03-24 09:10 AM


Little luck brought me this way
As tommorrow and all yesterdays

My guide on long winter roads
When taverns open to the week and cold

In snow so deep you lose your feet
My luck keeps me with heat

All along my steps stay fleet
As my luck its guides my feet

[This message has been edited by Walter Poe (edited 03-24-2000).]

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Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
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1 posted 2000-03-24 11:28 AM


Little luck brought me this way
As tommorrow and all yesterdays

i love that line walter...
and what a tasty treat to come in Dp and find several poems from you...on to the next one
jm

 Do you live by the book, do you play by the rules
Do you care what is thought by others about you
If this day is all that is promised to you
Do you live for the present, the future the past...
tracy chapman


kaile
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since 2000-02-06
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2 posted 2000-03-25 01:18 AM


Hmmm...the power of hope and faith! ")

"in snow so deep you lose your feet
My luck keeps me with heat"
i like these 2 lines best and the way the rest of the poem rhymes(i just love rhyming poems)

hmmm....a spelling mistake...it's "weak" rather than "week",right ")

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
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Sunny Queensland
3 posted 2000-03-25 01:34 AM


Aah reminds me of the olde Irish wishes of good luck..  Great one as always Walter  

 There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



Jesse Jaymz
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since 2000-01-24
Posts 708
Youngstown, ohio
4 posted 2000-03-25 05:25 PM


walter,
i agree with isis.  sounds like an old irish type of prayer.  i loved it.  from one traveler to another great job


 All we are is dust in the wind....



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