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The Battle |
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DragonFire New Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 7 |
The Battle the blackness surrounds me as i curl up in myself wrapping myself in my thoughts my soul is quiet yet tortured i am alone i like loneliness it is a comfort to know no one to dwell by myself engulfed in pain that only i can savour hording it close never to share pain is my companion sorrow my best friend regret is for those who wish for more i have no regrets i do not want or wish for anything light is blinding i do not want it to touch me i push it away light brings feelings i do not wish to feel i am afraid i sense the light surrounding me my little black room is threatened it's trying to seep in through cracks and crevices it is trying to claim my soul i curl up tighter burying my face in my knees i don't want to see the light please go away i can feel the warmth on my back i don't want to feel the light has found me it is too strong to fight yet fight it i must i increase my efforts holding tight to the past the light has grown stronger it enfolds me in it's embrace it bids me to stand and face it i scream as i feel the pain slip away i am lost in the brightness i stand alone in the light yet not alone unsure and frightened it guides me contentment eases pain away joy replaces sorrow at last i feel....help me....i feel Catherine |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Welcome Welcome to DP!! *hugs* Love you poem*love all of yours*, this one though....has a lot of my feelings and emotions in it. I love it! Keep it up *warmest hugs* Daniel |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Hi, welcome to Dp...you will fit right in  this is a VERY emotionally srtong and well expressed piece...the emotions of the poem lifted off the page...very good work. take care, jm Do you live by the book, do you play by the rules Do you care what is thought by others about you If this day is all that is promised to you Do you live for the present, the future the past... tracy chapman |
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Aiden Kelly Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 148Ft. Wayne, IN USA |
wow! welcome to dark passions! jm is right, you'll fit right in...know why? cuz you are good!!! i love the whole idea of clinging to the dark and hiding from the light! ******** light is blinding i do not want it to touch me i push it away light brings feelings i do not wish to feel ********* wow! |
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