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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
The darkness weighing in, I can feel it pounding against my chest My bleeding heart, fighting for life as it slowly dies beneath my cold bones and earthly flesh Face frozen in it's blank state while my eyes speak of the secrets and pain held deep inside A black cloud surrounding as I walk along, lost inside myself Completely nonchalant to the world around me Forever existing in the world of darkness "The dark weight of the hour humming madly filling my head with blood and sorrow and dread the executioner's song." -Jewel "The Dark Bells" ~*Angel of Darkness*~ |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
nice. very fitting into the dark theme. great images. jannel Dont wake the dead, Wake the dying, Don't change what you've said, Change what you're saying. |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
what can i say....been there, done that. very nice work. i love too much, and not enough. |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Thank you both very much...  "The dark weight of the hour humming madly filling my head with blood and sorrow and dread the executioner's song." -Jewel "The Dark Bells" ~*Angel of Darkness*~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
somebody turn on a light...wow... you really write the rule on dark with this one, chillingly dark.. very good work, take care, jm Do you live by the book, do you play by the rules Do you care what is thought by others about you If this day is all that is promised to you Do you live for the present, the future the past... tracy chapman |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Enchantress, Wow....can you get the light?? Bone chilling dark here. Great job!! Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Thank you JM and Lone Wolf...I'm still lookin for it... "The dark weight of the hour humming madly filling my head with blood and sorrow and dread the executioner's song." -Jewel "The Dark Bells" ~*Angel of Darkness*~ |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
I can really relate, especialy to the following lines! "as I walk along, lost inside myself Completely nochalant to the world around me forever existing in the world of darkness" Joy |
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