Dark Poetry #1 |
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StarryEyed Junior Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 20Florida |
Tell me now that you love only me, Tell me that I'm the only girl you will see. Hold me hand to your heart, Tell me that we will never part. Run you hand through my hair, Never cause me to shed a tear. Draw me pictures in the sand, Get on your knee and kiss my hand. Cuddle with me in the cold air, Shelter me from all that i fear. Dance with me under the moon, Read me poetry that will make me swoon. Wisper those three words the everyone loves to hear, Make all my troubles disapear. So will you love me with all you heart, Oh please say that we will never part. Unspoken love is the loudest of all |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Welcome to Passions and the dark forum. This is a lovely poem filled with longing and desire. We all want to be that special someone and know and believe that bond will never be broken. Well done There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Very loving words used here. I think we all want to hear those words from someone at sometime in our lives. And when the time comes we all shall hear them. Keep up the good work and the warm thoughts you carry so deep within you. Always, Dark_Kisses_Within |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
welcome to passions Starryeyed... so nice to have you here, this is a sweet and gentle poem full of tenderness... very nice, take care, jm and you can say baby... baby can I hold you tonight maybe if told you the right words... at the right time, you'd be mine... baby can I hold you tonight... tracy chapman |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
welcome. this was very sweet, and full of the things we all wish to hear. you spoke these words well. jannel Dont wake the dead, Wake the dying, Don't change what you've said, Change what you're saying. |
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Red Member
since 2000-01-01
Posts 143Ca |
I think I've been asking the same things forever.... to find someone willing *sighs* Beautiful poem! |
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Aiden Kelly Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 148Ft. Wayne, IN USA |
i like this piece! Welcome to passions!!! so simple yet so true! exactly what we all want, need...well done! |
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Broken Wings Member
since 2000-03-18
Posts 157Miami, FL. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!! this was a very lovely poem. hope to see more of your work. take care, Broken Wings "As you learn and grow, you will realize the greater the pain, the greater the growth." -IYANLA VANZANT |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Welcome to Passions, Full of Love and Hope, I enjoyed reading this one and long to hear those three words as well The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship." --Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
StarryEyed~ Welcome! What a sweet heartfelt poem! -SEA |
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Hope, tears, and renewal Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 74 |
Good poem, I could tell it comes from the heart. |
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Virgo Junior Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 46tx |
Great poem...hope to see more of your entries |
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CrEaTuRe Member
since 2000-01-01
Posts 260Kuala Lumpur,Malaysia |
it's a lovely first post hope to see more of it....... by the way, Welcome to Passion and DP dear |
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Sandra Cox Junior Member
since 2000-03-24
Posts 48Essex, London,UK |
A very heartfelt poem, I can associate with the words just like everyone else. Well done. Sandra |
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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
a beautiful poem love in down deep a love without borders time without space i see you heart in my place how i see you lying as you used to do my memories are falling deep down into you how i miss your sweet lips and your eyes of silver blue calling in my memory and how i know miss you keeping me beside you As youve gone away never forget i love you ner' the coldest winter day because i long to be with you on every long lonely day with the beauty that left me when you were gone away a poem from walter welcome to dark passions Hello darkness, my old friend, I've come to talk with you again, Because a vision softly creeping, Left its seeds while I was sleeping, And the vision that was planted in my brain Still remains Within the sound of silence. |
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AVANTI Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE |
welcome to darker pasions... that's a real sweet poem... If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves from which evolves the light... Avanti Rao |
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sports2girl Junior Member
since 2000-03-31
Posts 14 |
very good poem. Welsome to passions |
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