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StarryEyed
Junior Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 20
Florida

0 posted 2000-03-22 07:57 PM


Tell me now that you love only me,
Tell me that I'm the only girl you will see.

Hold me hand to your heart,
Tell me that we will never part.

Run you hand through my hair,
Never cause me to shed a tear.

Draw me pictures in the sand,
Get on your knee and kiss my hand.

Cuddle with me in the cold air,
Shelter me from all that i fear.

Dance with me under the moon,
Read me poetry that will make me swoon.

Wisper those three words the everyone loves to hear,
Make all my troubles disapear.

So will you love me with all you heart,
Oh please say that we will never part.





 Unspoken love is the loudest of all

© Copyright 2000 StarryEyed - All Rights Reserved
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
1 posted 2000-03-22 08:28 PM


Welcome to Passions and the dark forum.  This is a lovely poem filled with longing and desire.  We all want to be that special someone and know and believe that bond will never be broken.  Well done  

 There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas
2 posted 2000-03-22 09:50 PM


Very loving words used here.  I think we all want to hear those words from someone at sometime in our lives.  And when the time comes we all shall hear them.
Keep up the good work and the warm thoughts you carry so deep within you.

Always,
Dark_Kisses_Within

Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

3 posted 2000-03-22 10:15 PM


welcome to passions Starryeyed...
so nice to have you here, this is a sweet and gentle poem full of tenderness...
very nice,
take care, jm

 and you can say baby...
baby can I hold you tonight
maybe if told you the right words...
at the right time,
you'd be mine...
baby can I hold you tonight...
tracy chapman



Jannel
Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492
Muncie, IN, USA
4 posted 2000-03-22 11:08 PM


welcome. this was very sweet, and full of the things we all wish to hear. you spoke these words well.
jannel

 Dont wake the dead,
Wake the dying,
Don't change what you've said,
Change what you're saying.

Red
Member
since 2000-01-01
Posts 143
Ca
5 posted 2000-03-22 11:40 PM


I think I've been asking the same things forever.... to find someone willing  *sighs*  Beautiful poem!
Aiden Kelly
Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 148
Ft. Wayne, IN USA
6 posted 2000-03-23 03:49 PM


i like this piece!  Welcome to passions!!!  
so simple yet so true!  exactly what we all want, need...well done!  

Broken Wings
Member
since 2000-03-18
Posts 157
Miami, FL.
7 posted 2000-03-23 06:45 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!
this was a very lovely poem. hope to see more of your work.

take care,
Broken Wings  


 "As you learn and grow, you will realize the greater the pain, the greater the growth."
-IYANLA VANZANT



dhuron
Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476

8 posted 2000-03-28 04:02 PM


Welcome to Passions,

Full of Love and Hope, I enjoyed reading this one and long to hear those three words as well  

 The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship."

--Ralph Waldo Emerson


SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676
with you
9 posted 2000-03-28 04:36 PM


StarryEyed~ Welcome!   What a sweet heartfelt poem! -SEA
Hope, tears, and renewal
Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 74

10 posted 2000-03-28 08:21 PM


Good poem, I could tell it comes from the heart.
Virgo
Junior Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 46
tx
11 posted 2000-03-29 02:32 PM


Great poem...hope to see more of your entries
CrEaTuRe
Member
since 2000-01-01
Posts 260
Kuala Lumpur,Malaysia
12 posted 2000-03-29 11:28 PM


it's a lovely first post hope to see more of it.......
by the way, Welcome to Passion and DP dear  

Sandra Cox
Junior Member
since 2000-03-24
Posts 48
Essex, London,UK
13 posted 2000-03-30 01:33 PM


A very heartfelt poem, I can associate with the words just like everyone else.  Well done.

Sandra

Walter Poe
Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787

14 posted 2000-04-01 05:44 AM


a beautiful poem love in down deep

a love without borders
time without space
i see you heart in my place
how i see you lying
as you used to do
my memories are falling
deep down into you
how i miss your sweet lips
and your eyes of silver blue
calling in my memory
and how i know miss you
keeping me beside you
As youve gone away
never forget i love you
ner' the coldest winter day
because i long to be with you
on every long lonely day
with the beauty that left me
when you were gone away

a poem from walter welcome to dark passions

  Hello darkness, my old friend,
I've come to talk with you again,
Because a vision softly creeping,
Left its seeds while I was sleeping,
And the vision that was planted in my brain
Still remains
Within the sound of silence.

AVANTI
Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 664
INDIA/MAHARASHTRA/PUNE
15 posted 2000-04-01 10:40 AM


welcome to darker pasions...
that's a real sweet poem...


 If all was light...then I would have never learnt the dark...from which such truth evolves
from which evolves the light...
Avanti Rao

sports2girl
Junior Member
since 2000-03-31
Posts 14

16 posted 2000-04-01 08:50 PM


very good poem. Welsome to passions
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