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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Dying slowly as she sings her last tune So haunting and heavy it bleeds into me Disease striken, I fall over without the strength to get back up Mind buzzing and heart falling, there's nothing left for me now Hope never served me well, just led me into denial and now that all, all has left and given up... The loves torn by the jagged tips of my soul They left me here, out in the cold Pride too strong and dissapointment feared, I cry out in a silent tongue So I'll hug you and smile through my blind goodbye You'll never know what happend to me, You'll never know that I died oh so many times I never meant for this to happen I wanted to be perfect for you But I know I'm not good enough, for you left me long ago But I don't hate you, I still love you and I love them too So when I'm over, when it's all through I want you to read this poem and remember me as I will remember all of you, When my eyes have closed for the very last time Forever yours, Angel "The dark weight of the hour humming madly filling my head with blood and sorrow and dread the executioner's song." -Jewel "The Dark Bells" ~*Angel of Darkness*~ |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Angel, Such haunting words. I feel your pain. Hang in there, no where to go but up. **HUGS**  Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Aiden Kelly Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 148Ft. Wayne, IN USA |
i think i agree with the wolf ( ) on this one...haunting is definitely the word...hope doesn't always lead to denial but oh how it can! i hear you, hon! only worry about being perfect for yourself never anyone else!!! beautiful, vivid, haunting...great work!!! hang in there! |
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StarrGazer Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679Texas |
Angel - I love all the emotions of this poem so painful and heartwrenching and great ! Pride too strong and dissapointment feared, I cry out in a silent tongue So I'll hug you and smile through my blind goodbye done this many times pride always my downfall that thrusts me into the darkness once again great post!! (((hugz))) "A poet is one who spends a lifetime standing out in thunderstorms, waiting to be hit by lightning" ~Randal Jarrell~ |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Haunting and sad.. Honey I can't agree with Lone Wolf on this, things can get better sure, but I hope you aren't truly considering an end?? If you are please, please email me, if not, sorry, if I read too much into this, it only comes from caring... There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Thank you all very much for replying to my poem. It means a lot to me. Isis I'm doing better now I guess but I'll email you later or something because it's too much for me to get into now. But thank you for caring. *hugglez*Yours truly, Angel "The dark weight of the hour humming madly filling my head with blood and sorrow and dread the executioner's song." -Jewel "The Dark Bells" ~*Angel of Darkness*~ |
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Sparks Junior Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 11Sandy Lake, Pa |
I've got to agree with the others. Haunting is the word. I read that and just sat back and said 'wow...', and that pretty much sums it up, eh? good work. |
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sonjes Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564North Carolina |
Extremely expressive words here. It seems that we die a little with every person that has touched our souls departs from our life. Things seem so dark for a while, but we grow stronger and our art flourishes and aids in our recovery. Can't find words to say how much I enjoyed reading this tearful goodbye. Don't care what people say Just follow your own way Don't give up and use the chance To return to innocence. -Enigma |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Thank you Sparks and sonjes I didn't think that this poem was very good but it meant a lot to me because of it's meaning so I wanted to share it. I'm glad you both enjoyed it. Yours truly, Angel "The dark weight of the hour humming madly filling my head with blood and sorrow and dread the executioner's song." -Jewel "The Dark Bells" ~*Angel of Darkness*~ |
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Broken Member
since 2000-03-12
Posts 271The woods |
I really don`t know what to say, your pain and sorrow shows. I wish I could write my feelings as well as you do, the words pierce my heart and makes me bleed inside. Keep writng my friend in the dark. |
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Broken Member
since 2000-03-12
Posts 271The woods |
I really don`t know what to say, your pain and sorrow shows. I wish I could write my feelings as well as you do, the words pierce my heart and makes me bleed inside. Keep writng my friend in the dark. I`m running out of time, I`m out of step and closing down, I never sleep for wanting hours the empty hours of greed. And uselessly always the need to feel again the real belief, of something more than mockery. If only I could fill my heart with love. -Robert Smith |
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