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I Need A Friend
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I Need A Friend |
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Darla New Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 8 |
I Need A Friend I need A friend, Are you out there? I need a friend today. I need a friend, To fight this pain, And take these tears away. I need a friend, I've really tried, To hold my head up high. I need a friend, That I can hold, As I sit and cry. I need a friend, To share the pain, I can no longer bear. I need a friend, For just a while, Tell me…are you there? If you are, then tell me please, Help me ease my pain. Help me find the sunshine, Help me leave the rain. I need a friend, I need your hugs, I'm no longer strong. I need a friend, To see me through, I've waited for so long. If you are out there somewhere, Please help me today. Please don't just reject me, Don't turn me away. I need a friend, I need your love, So this message I will send Is there anybody out there? Hello….I need a friend. Darla R. R. |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
This poem brought back alot of painful memories for me. Very well expressed on ur part. A friend is always out there. Just sometimes they are also frightened too. Never give up tho. Dark_Kisses_Within |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
HI Darla and welcome to passions, you will find many poetic friends here... beautiful poem, so nice to have you join us. take care, jm |
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Broken Wings Member
since 2000-03-18
Posts 157Miami, FL. |
This poem is BEAUTIFUL, i've cried these same words for so long. Keep faith, that one true friend is out there and all you have to do, even tho it's hard, is trust. take care, Broken Wings "As you learn and grow, you will realize the greater the pain, the greater the growth." -IYANLA VANZANT |
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StarrGazer Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679Texas |
Darla Welcome !!! Great first post, think we have all felt this way at one time or another good job expressing those emotions !! "A poet is one who spends a lifetime standing out in thunderstorms, waiting to be hit by lightning" ~Randal Jarrell~ |
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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
If you want a friend i am always here E-mail me if it gets to much always Walter Did you write the Book of Love And do you have faith in God above If the Bible tells you so Do you believe in rock 'n roll Can music save your mortal soul And can you teach me how to dance real slow |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Darla....great poem. Such emotion, from deep within. We all feel that way sometimes. But you can always find a friend here....I know I did. Hope to see more of your work. I [email protected] |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
This is a wonderful poem Darla and if you hold on you'll find a friend. A real friend...they are so rare...but well worth the wait. Keep your eyes open...they're not too easy to find...especially with your head down. Once again, beautiful poem Darla and welcome to Dark Passions. Yours truly, Angel "The dark weight of the hour humming madly filling my head with blood and sorrow and dread the executioner's song." -Jewel "The Dark Bells" ~*Angel of Darkness*~ |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Darla, welcome to passions. We in the dark can relate to the pain you are feeling. True friends are rare and precious like gems. One is there for you. Feel free to e-mail anytime you need to talk. Great poem. Friends are friend forever if the Lord's the Lord of them and a friend will not say never cause the welcome will not end. --Michael W. Smith |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
darla *hugs* you will always have a friend here. dark passions is like a family to me. and like family we help eachother when we are down. and we care for eachother. and you are now a member of that family. so anytime you need a friend just e-mail me. i will be there to pick you up. keep your head up my friend. things will look up. and welcome to the family. All we are is dust in the wind.... |
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StarryEyed Junior Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 20Florida |
Hey Darla, that was a great poem. I hope you find that special friend who will be there for you through it all. If you ever need a friend, i am here. Keep up the good work. Unspoken love is the loudest of all |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Darla, Isn't it amazing how relatable these people here are? I am too. Welcome to the family. Many, many friends here for you to share your pain with. Joy |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Welcome to the passions family and the dark forum Darla!! As everyone before me has stated we are indeed a family of friends here to share poetry and feelings and problems. Very soon, you will make some wonderful friends here in Passions who will be there for you, only an email away. Sad first poem, but hon you aren't alone... There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Sparks Junior Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 11Sandy Lake, Pa |
Wonderful poem. This brought back a time in my life when I felt so desperately alone and helpless and I thought noone would help me out. no matter how bad it gets, always keep the faith in your fellow man to reach a hand down to pull you out of the pitfalls life sets. |
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sonjes Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564North Carolina |
Welcome, welcome, welcome, wonderful poet, darla. This poem spoke to me like few poems can. Friends are something everyone needs and sometimes you find the best ones in the strangest places. Be strong and keep writing. Don't care what people say Just follow your own way Don't give up and use the chance To return to innocence. -Enigma |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Great Poem Stirs many emotions and memories I have had. Only time will tell, be strong. A friend will be introduced soon. Dhuron |
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