Dark Poetry #1 |
I'ts Not Right !!! |
Chico Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 67 |
I'ts not right !! It's not right ! I'ts not fair. That I have to fight. to breath for air... Why is it light, When you are there? Then it turns dark as night. to dark to bear. How can you say goodnight, without a trace of care? Leacing me alone in fright.. That your dreams I'll never share. Why do you get a green light. And get to go everywhere? Whe I get a red light, And can't go anywhere? You get to go left and right, Or anywhere you dare... But I have to follow my headlight. And stay on the throughfare. I'ts just not right. I want to Tell you I care. But I'm afraid I might. Just get a glare... So I'll just stay out of sight, and sit here and stare. Hoping some day god might. Answer my prayer... |
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Jonas Senior Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 796Oregon |
Powerful! Frustration and anger rings loud and clear in this piece. Those who dream by day are cognizant of many things which escape those who dream only by night. -Edgar Allen Poe |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
you have expressed you frustration and pain well in this..great rhyme flow in it as well good work. take care jm and you can say baby... baby can I hold you tonight maybe if told you the right words... at the right time, you'd be mine... baby can I hold you tonight... tracy chapman |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Such frustration, there are two ways to go, 1. Summon the courage declare yourself and take the consequences. 2. Let it go, perhaps it's not meant to be, if they haven't woken up yet? Wrenching poem though, well done!! There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Broken Wings Member
since 2000-03-18
Posts 157Miami, FL. |
Very powerful poem... and your right It's not fair or right. great poem!! take care, Broken Wings "As you learn and grow, you will realize the greater the pain, the greater the growth." -IYANLA VANZANT |
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