Dark Poetry #1 |
Fan Fic Dream |
TanAngel Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 168Oviedo, Florida, USA |
Fan Fic Dream He turns to me in the ballroom lined with gold Eyes open fully...I will charish every word Opens his lips...but before he can speak... A monster tears him away from me...all my work down an icy cold drain Holding his other hand, yet no longer in his arms The beasts claws too sharp, teeth over teeth in it's hideous appearence The roof of the ballroom collapses around us...my fellow scouts around me now... Yelling at me to transform...put on my mask... Never give up my love, I scream as if I know these are my last words My love has taken his last breath...he shall be with me at my demise The mosterous creature opens its snarling mouth, one drop of blood falls to the golden tile A sword below, somehow I know my destiny I lift the heavey silver sword with my now empty, lonly hands One chance to evenge my true loves death With a tear stained face and shakey, bloody hands I insert the cold silver into the swirling monster Too good of a death for this revolting monster... My world turning inside out as I fall onto my knees Killing another will never bring him back...I look at the pool of blood beneth me Now cold and beaten I shall die in honor...the pain of my heart throbs as I draw a last breath Lifting his hand as the scouts...in tears fall beside me... P.S. hope you like! This was a dream of mine...'cept I left out being recarnated and being transported to Earth...*smile*...more of a nightmare till the end! "Sheltered from the world you scare yourself from the rain...away from the dark sickning fog that so stumblest unto your heart...for no true poet holds loves hand..."-TanAngel |
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Bronx Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 84Oviedo, Florida, U.S. |
WOW!- I really like this one TanAngel. It was great. It reminded me of some sort of Fairy Tale gone...wrong... This had a not so great ending to it though. But it did fit. I liked the part about a death too good for the monster. I thought that was a wonderful way of a expressing how much you hated the evil monster. Great poem! bye Bronx Be careful! It's a jungle out there! |
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~Venus~ Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 128 |
I like...I like! ~goddess of love, passion, and desire~ I'll be here...why? I'll be waiting...for what? 'll be waiting for you so...if you come here, you'll find me... I promise. |
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