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suicidal dreams Member
since 1999-09-28
Posts 343Toledo Ohio USA |
Flesh burning. Bones broiling. Blood flowing through rivers of pain eternal. This is not the Heaven I know of. Where are the gates of gold and angels of love? I see none of these. All I see is fire hotter than any other and deamons red as the most ruby blood, and a sign which reads. All lies are born of truth.... ------------------ life is short kill quick [This message has been edited by suicidal dreams (edited 09-28-1999).] [This message has been edited by suicidal dreams (edited 11-11-1999).] |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
Stunning work Thomas.  ------------------ "Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage." -Billy Corgan- |
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suicidal dreams Member
since 1999-09-28
Posts 343Toledo Ohio USA |
thx for the nice little reply (:------------------ life is short kill quick |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Awesome work here Sweetie !! Jenny |
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suicidal dreams Member
since 1999-09-28
Posts 343Toledo Ohio USA |
im glad people like it it is one of mine and sys. demise'sfavorites ------------------ life is short kill quick |
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suicidal dreams Member
since 1999-09-28
Posts 343Toledo Ohio USA |
Hmm ive gotta bring this one back it is one of my favorites ------------------ life is short kill quick |
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Deep Blue Me Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396By a big lake |
I feel the heat, my brother. DB |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
One of my favorites too Dear Heart  Jenny Lee ------------------ Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
This really did something for each of us, great job!!  ------------------ Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing... ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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suicidal dreams Member
since 1999-09-28
Posts 343Toledo Ohio USA |
wow they liked it thank you all so much alls we all need are good words and inspiration ------------------ life is short kill quick |
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Deverone Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 136San Antonio, Tx, USA |
suicidal.......this is a very good job ...I liked it a lot..... one question though....if lies are born out of truth....what is truth born out of?? No offense(just makes me think a little.) ------------------ Deverone "We are cups, constantly and quietly being filled. The trick is, knowing how to tip ourselves over and let the beautiful stuff out". ----Ray Bradbury--- |
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