»
Archives
»
Dark Poetry #1
»
Concubine
| Dark Poetry #1 |
|
Concubine |
|
|
Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland 
|
In the death throws, Body spasming uncontroledly, Blood spews forth like a whale's spouting, Scent on death hangs in the air. Where is the saviour? God bless and god speed? Nothing to ease the need, The devil's concubine drops her head and feeds. Putrid stink, Carried Heavenbound, Soul all healed and new, Putrified death buried below ground. Oh I want to be there, Beside the lake full of Pirana, I want to melt In the hot molten liquor. But not tonight my love, Now is not the time, Eventually the challenge will come, You will be the new concubine. ------------------ Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing... ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
||
| © Copyright 1999 Isis - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
suicidal dreams Member
since 1999-09-28
Posts 343Toledo Ohio USA |
This one was great like all the others btw niice word usage ------------------ life is short kill quick |
||
|
Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Thanks SD which words did you like if I may ask??? ------------------ Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing... ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
||
|
suicidal dreams Member
since 1999-09-28
Posts 343Toledo Ohio USA |
Bassically all the words in the 1st and 4th paragraph ------------------ life is short kill quick |
||
|
Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Thanks SD, interests me why others like something in particular is all!!  ------------------ Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing... ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
||
|
Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
Isis, the imagery is great....but I must ask to actually understand the poem, at the risk of sounding dumb, what is a concubine? ------------------ Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices. |
||
|
Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Systematic Decay, a concubine is a whore, be it paid or unpaid..... ------------------ Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing... ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
||
|
Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
Now I understand........nice work, Isis. ------------------ Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices. |
||
|
JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Nice one Isis...reminds me of Saul's Concubines.... Jenny ------------------ Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
||
|
Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Thanks Jenny Lee ------------------ Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing... ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
||
|
Deep Blue Me Member
since 1999-11-04
Posts 396By a big lake |
Images of succubial splendor. The picture is so brutal, I cannot look away. DB |
||
|
Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Thanks DB, but you did look away when you hit 'Submit Reply' LOL Thanks hon ------------------ Through poetry my heart and soul truly sing... ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||