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TanAngel Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 168Oviedo, Florida, USA |
Lost in a shield of pain Revolving towards you sweet touch How could you ever love me? Why didn't you ask if I felt the same? I miss your shoulder, there are never my tears there anymore... You have yet to hold me in your arms I long for your touch once again Why can't I see your sparkling blue eyes? We blew our chance... Boxes all along my heart Leaving my lover behind... One fatel kiss shall end it all A dagger and a gun...shall we run? Plunging into a tender orgin Shall end the deadly shield... P.S.-no I am NOT thinking about suciede! "Sheltered from the world you scare yourself from the rain...away from the dark sickning fog that so stumblest unto your heart...for no true poet holds loves hand..."-TanAngel |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Thank Goodness you're not! This was powerful though. Sounds like you got inspiration in a dark place, thanks for sharing it here! Right where it belongs.  Joy |
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~Venus~ Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 128 |
Sad, yet sweet. I like! ~goddess of love, passion, and desire~ I'll be here...why? I'll be waiting...for what? 'll be waiting for you so...if you come here, you'll find me... I promise. |
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dhuron Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476 |
Very Sad and full of power. Great Job The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship." --Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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ShadowHeart Junior Member
since 2000-03-25
Posts 49 |
Great job! Glad you aren't thinking about suicide though. If you ever need to talk, you know where I am. <3 ya shadow Love is our greatest weakness, but when it's found, it's our greatest strength. |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
I've used gun and knife many times to drive home a point so to speak. love it. Joel. I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Shields can be hazardous And glad you aren't suicidal  A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
pure bliss to read. thank you. love the shoulders and no tears. wow. *****kynder quote: |
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