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TanAngel
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since 2000-02-01
Posts 168
Oviedo, Florida, USA

0 posted 2000-03-20 06:40 PM



Lost in a shield of pain
Revolving towards you sweet touch
How could you ever love me?
Why didn't you ask if I felt the same?
I miss your shoulder, there are never my tears there anymore...
You have yet to hold me in your arms
I long for your touch once again
Why can't I see your sparkling blue eyes?
We blew our chance...
Boxes all along my heart
Leaving my lover behind...
One fatel kiss shall end it all
A dagger and a gun...shall we run?
Plunging into a tender orgin
Shall end the deadly shield...
  


P.S.-no I am NOT thinking about suciede!


 "Sheltered from the world you scare yourself from the rain...away from the dark sickning fog that so stumblest unto your heart...for no true poet holds loves hand..."-TanAngel

© Copyright 2000 Jessica Farrell - All Rights Reserved
JOY 14
Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA
1 posted 2000-03-20 06:54 PM


Thank Goodness you're not!  This was powerful though.  Sounds like you got inspiration in a dark place, thanks for sharing it here!  Right where it belongs.  

Joy

~Venus~
Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 128

2 posted 2000-03-20 08:19 PM


Sad, yet sweet. I like!

 ~goddess of love, passion, and desire~

I'll be here...why? I'll
be waiting...for what?
'll be waiting for you
so...if you come here,
you'll find me...

I promise.

dhuron
Member
since 2000-03-19
Posts 476

3 posted 2000-04-12 10:23 PM


Very Sad and full of power. Great Job

 The glory of friendship is not the outstretched hand, not the kindly smile, not the joy of companionship; it is the spiritual inspiration that comes to one when he discovers that someone believes in him and is willing to trust him with his friendship."

--Ralph Waldo Emerson


ShadowHeart
Junior Member
since 2000-03-25
Posts 49

4 posted 2000-04-13 11:45 AM


Great job!  Glad you aren't thinking about suicide though.  If you ever need to talk, you know where I am.  

<3 ya
shadow


 Love is our greatest weakness, but when it's found, it's our greatest strength.


Joel the wolf
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333
Angels Camp
5 posted 2000-04-13 05:59 PM


I've used gun and knife many times to drive home a point so to speak.
love it.
Joel.


 I howl a mornful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel.

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
6 posted 2000-04-13 11:48 PM


Shields can be hazardous  
And glad you aren't suicidal  

 A heart and soul are not judged by how much you love, but by how much you are loved by others...
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



kynder
Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida
7 posted 2000-04-14 01:09 PM


pure bliss to read.  thank you.  love the shoulders and no tears.  wow.  

*****kynder

 
quote:
God will not look you over for medals, degrees or diplomas, but for scars. - written by Elbert Hubbard, profound to Kynder.


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