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demonic~angel Member
since 2000-03-11
Posts 54Kansas |
Icy hands surround me I can't see Morbid melodies I hear Filling my ears My soul dripping black with sin It seeps through my skin Paranoia fills my brain I am truly insane Messenger of fear in sight Dark deception kills the light ~Metallica~ |
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CrEaTuRe Member
since 2000-01-01
Posts 260Kuala Lumpur,Malaysia |
A nice piece short yet the feelings are easy to be seen sometimes all of us are little .......great job dear ....  |
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StarrGazer Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679Texas |
Love this DA great job !!! ((((hugzzz)))) "A poet is one who spends a lifetime standing out in thunderstorms, waiting to be hit by lightning" ~Randal Jarrell~ |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
< !signature--> "The dark weight of the hour humming madly filling my head with blood and sorrow and dread the executioner's song." -Jewel "The Dark Bells" ~*Angel of Darkness*~ [This message has been edited by Dark Enchantress (edited 03-20-2000).] |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
God dam...oke I'll stop..well I messed up while typing it in..lol..don't I feel like an idiot...but anywayz...Wonderful poem DA! Keep'em coming! Yours truly, Angel "The dark weight of the hour humming madly filling my head with blood and sorrow and dread the executioner's song." -Jewel "The Dark Bells" ~*Angel of Darkness*~ |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
nice. a lot said in a few words. Dont wake the dead, Wake the dying, Don't change what you've said, Change what you're saying. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Such despair in so few words, that is an accomplishment, well done!!! You are not a sinner or insane either!! There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
DA. . . paranoia can take away things from us that we love. . . Again, you have managed to say a lot in a few words... a talent that does not go by unappreciated. . . --------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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demonic~angel Member
since 2000-03-11
Posts 54Kansas |
Thanks for your replies all of you *huggz*...I thought it is too short...but hey if ya'll like it then I will do more like this one...*s* Messenger of fear in sight Dark deception kills the light ~Metallica~ |
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