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| Dark Poetry #1 |
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The God you give..... |
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The Jackal Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 426Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A |
where did you get those empty eyes i have to know so i can get a pair of my own and what do you do with broken lies im curious..curious to the bone some say the god you own is the god you give show me the lesson here there IS more to life than just fear..... for me the need is always just to disappear... |
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StarrGazer Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679Texas |
Jackal good job can relate to the questions asked her and the need or want to dissapear  "A poet is one who spends a lifetime standing out in thunderstorms, waiting to be hit by lightning" ~Randal Jarrell~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
where did you get those empty eyes i have to know so i can get a pair of my own and what do you do with broken lies im curious..curious to the bone ------------- jac, this poem is AWESOME...man, it hit me from the first line...you nailed this one... i relate to this in a major way. its perfect. take care, jm and you can say baby... baby can I hold you tonight maybe if told you the right words... at the right time, you'd be mine... baby can I hold you tonight... tracy chapman |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Questions we may never really get the answer to!!! Some people suffer from religious hypocrisy, and for sure the answers aren't with them. Say one thing, always doing another. Interesting thoughts and questions, too much for my brain at this time of day!!! There is only one corner of the universe you can be certain of improving, and that's your own self... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
nice, every word was just right. and an incredible opening, i must say. great work. jannel Dont wake the dead, Wake the dying, Don't change what you've said, Change what you're saying. |
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