navwin » Archives » Dark Poetry #1 » Drive On....
Dark Poetry #1
Post A Reply Post New Topic Drive On.... Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

0 posted 2000-03-18 06:38 PM


Long lonely highway,
Stretching into the unknown,
With only the full moon for company,
Again I find myself alone.

Drive on through the night,
Drive on... Drive on.......

Sister moon she calls to me,
With promises of new beginnings,
Promises that I am free,
A land where happiness is never ending.

Drive on through the night,
Drive on ..... Drive on.....

I glance in the back seat,
There lies my sleeping son,
He too needs a new life,
A new beginning, a new song.

Drive on through the night,
Drive on....Drive on.....

I turn on the radio for company,
I sing as the miles roll by,
Erasing all those memories,
The ones that made us cry.

Drive on through the night,
Drive on.....Drive on.......

Sunrise envitably comes as it must,
A new day, a new dawning just for us,
A new world and life awaits us,
Ashes to ashes, dust to dust.

Drive on through the night,
Drive on....Drive on.......


 May the world hug you today,
With it's warmth and love.
I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart,
That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world,
Wishing you well and
wishing you love......
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)


© Copyright 2000 Isis - All Rights Reserved
Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA
1 posted 2000-03-18 07:09 PM


Very sad and moving, Isis.  Hope you find what you are looking for.
Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 2000-03-18 07:11 PM


This isn't really me, just a play of words, reminds me of a song...  
Thanks Lone Wolf  

 May the world hug you today,
With it's warmth and love.
I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart,
That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world,
Wishing you well and
wishing you love......
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)


Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

3 posted 2000-03-18 07:12 PM


wow ISIS   I love the emotions of this poem...you have really been cranking the words out lately...
I really felt you in this poem...
very nice...on to better days...take the high road...(smile)
love ya jm

 Now for me some words come easy
But I know that they don't mean that much
Compared with the things that are said when lovers touch
You never knew what I loved in you
I don't know what you loved in me
Maybe the picture of somebody you were hoping I might be
jackson browne



Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
4 posted 2000-03-18 07:31 PM


Thanks Janet Marie, I enjoyed writing my little song  

 May the world hug you today,
With it's warmth and love.
I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart,
That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world,
Wishing you well and
wishing you love......
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)


Sven
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA
5 posted 2000-03-18 09:59 PM


Isis. . .

This is a wonderful piece, and it did indeed remind me of a song. . .

Perhaps I should pull out the old keyboard and get started. . .

Driving on as always, my friend. . .

--------------------------------------------------

 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
6 posted 2000-03-19 01:47 AM


It's all we can do sometimes..   Thanks Sven

 May the world hug you today,
With it's warmth and love.
I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart,
That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world,
Wishing you well and
wishing you love......
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)


Aiden Kelly
Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 148
Ft. Wayne, IN USA
7 posted 2000-03-19 02:04 AM


keep moving on until you find a home, right?  it's hard to do sometimes but sometimes it's for the best.  i kinda felt like i was in the car too....i think the reptition makes it feel like i'm in a moving vehicle...i like this piece.  remainds me of a song by Savage Garden ~Two Beds and a Coffee Machine~

Another ditch in the road
You keep moving
Another stop sign
You keep moving on
And the years go by so fast
Wonder how I ever made it through

StarrGazer
Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679
Texas
8 posted 2000-03-19 02:39 AM


Isis  this  was great  ... hiding in the trunk  I want to go tooo!!!!

 "A poet is one who spends a lifetime standing out in thunderstorms, waiting to be hit by lightning"
~Randal Jarrell~



Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
9 posted 2000-03-19 06:52 PM


Perhaps we should hire a few buses and all who want can come!!  

 May the world hug you today,
With it's warmth and love.
I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart,
That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world,
Wishing you well and
wishing you love......
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)


Bronx
Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 84
Oviedo, Florida, U.S.
10 posted 2000-03-19 07:11 PM


wow-
i liked this one.  Another one with great emotions!  I love emotions...even the bad...cause with the passing of the bad the good come and make us feel better much like this new life you were talking about...
bye
Bronx


 Be careful!
It's a jungle out there!


Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Dark Poetry #1 » Drive On....

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary