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TanAngel Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 168Oviedo, Florida, USA |
I hope you guys like...this is how I've been feeling latly...I changed my signature to something more...uh...me! Well please tell me how you guys like or how you don't like it... Alone in a world that never has had a place for me In a hole at the bottom of the Earth A storm quakes harder than a metor shower Fire burns at my soul like a thousand sharpe knives Love will never show me the way I feel like I am missing a peice of this torturing puzzle... Sitting in that dark corner...no one ever knowing how I feel "Sheltered from the world you scare yourself from the rain...away from the dark sickning fog that so stumblest unto your heart...for no true poet holds loves hand..."-TanAngel |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
TanAngel, we ALL feel this way at times, even though you reckon no one knows etc. Great imagery though. Like your new signature too, though you might like to change the spelling of 'sickening' *hugs*  May the world hug you today, With it's warmth and love. I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart, That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world, Wishing you well and wishing you love...... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Very nicely written TanAngel...don't worry about love though...you'll find it when your not even looking for it from the most unexpected stranger. Or maybe it'll be your life-long friend..*shrugs* who really knows...but the point is..it'll come to you when you're truly ready to find it. And it'll be worth the wait and the scars that you picked up along the way. Trust me...there are a few things that I know to be true...and this is one of them. Just listen to your heart when it speaks to you... Yours truly, Angel "The dark weight of the hour humming madly filling my head with blood and sorrow and dread the executioner's song." -Jewel "The Dark Bells" ~*Angel of Darkness*~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
TA, very emotional piece, im sorry your feelingf this way of late...but writing it out does help...I love the signature...very well expressed... take care jm Now for me some words come easy But I know that they don't mean that much Compared with the things that are said when lovers touch You never knew what I loved in you I don't know what you loved in me Maybe the picture of somebody you were hoping I might be jackson browne |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
TA, life has its ups and downs for all of us. Know that your life will not always be as it is right now. The clouds always break and sunshine will warmly touch your face. I feel that getting beyond the darker days in our lives helps us appreciate happier days when they arrive, and they will arrive for you. Be strong and remember, no one can hold us down without our permission. |
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~Venus~ Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 128 |
>_< Being alone sucks. |
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Aiden Kelly Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 148Ft. Wayne, IN USA |
wow! i know how you feel...believe me. loneliness can be like a cancer if you allow it to take over your life...been there. i can definitely empathize...and just so you know, you are NOT alone! give yourself a great big HUG from me!  ) |
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Bronx Member
since 2000-01-28
Posts 84Oviedo, Florida, U.S. |
you're right- no one does know how you feel. And no one ever will unless you tell someone. You know where i am... bye Bronx Be careful! It's a jungle out there! |
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Broken Member
since 2000-03-12
Posts 271The woods |
I know the feeling of being alone. And your poem describes how I feel sometimes, but don't worry, it will get better...I hope. Very well written! |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
You know - it's easy to agonize over that one missing piece. But so often we never see the beauty in the rest of the puzzle for doing so. Michael |
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