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PoeticKnight
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since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA

0 posted 2000-03-17 04:53 PM


Oh what misery descends upon me
And oh, what things I see which will never be
What treasures are left to be found
And will heralding horns make their sound?

Atlantis lies asleep in its watery grave
No more lives nor souls to save
No more secret paths through woods to discover
Nor ancient relics to recover

Oh, what pitiful, miserable wretch
Nothing left down the stretch
All the lessons have been learned
And all the bridges have been burned

Too many sunsets wasted
And too many salty tears tasted
No more innocent hearts unbroken
All the lies between the truth are spoken

I took all the world would give
And yet, still on I live
Oh me, pitiful, miserable wretch
Misery is all there is, and nothing left


© Copyright 2000 J.M. Landry - All Rights Reserved
Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
1 posted 2000-03-17 05:03 PM


JML-
This was so incredibly sad, but very well written!

Amy

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~

PoeticKnight
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since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144
New Orleans, LA
2 posted 2000-03-17 05:10 PM


Aimster - Then that makes me incredibly happy, and thank you very much.

StarrGazer
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since 2000-03-05
Posts 679
Texas
3 posted 2000-03-17 11:06 PM


great work as usual ...know this feeling all to well what do you do when you feel like you've lived it all seen it all heard it all done it all wrote it all even ... been trying to figure that out  on my own  so maybe I'm just  projecting my own thoughts on to your poem ...

 ~*Love begins with a smile, grows with a kiss, and ends with a tear*~



KimW
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since 2000-03-04
Posts 268
Medford, Oregon, USA
4 posted 2000-03-17 11:12 PM


Very well written and "felt!"

Kim

Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
5 posted 2000-03-17 11:44 PM


This was wonderful JML!!  Sorry to steal the title name... I hadn't even seen your similar title until after I posted.. sorry hon.  As for the poem with the Atlantis references made it quite mythical  

 May the world hug you today,
With it's warmth and love.
I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart,
That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world,
Wishing you well and
wishing you love......
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)


Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

6 posted 2000-03-18 10:37 AM


you wallow in your misery most poetically...
very sad jer...mind over matter(smile)
stalking you always,
your jm

 Now for me some words come easy
But I know that they don't mean that much
Compared with the things that are said when lovers touch
You never knew what I loved in you
I don't know what you loved in me
Maybe the picture of somebody you were hoping I might be
jackson browne



Sven
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since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA
7 posted 2000-03-18 10:03 PM


JML, as always, you have found that part of me that longs to be released. . .thank you my friend. . .

Wonderful. . .

---------------------------------------------------

 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Aiden Kelly
Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 148
Ft. Wayne, IN USA
8 posted 2000-03-19 02:28 AM


so beautifully and sorrowfully written.  i love it.  it touches a part of me that i can't quite express right now but i'm affected.  keep writing like this and i will be an devoted fan of your work.  
Jannel
Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492
Muncie, IN, USA
9 posted 2000-03-19 05:07 PM


A lovely expression of sorrow and depression. I really enjoyed the line about sunsets wasted.
jannel

 "I'm just saying
that we've mistaken one
for thousands of words,
and for that mistake
I've caused you such pain
that I damn that word."
-10000 Maniacs "Jezebel"



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