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Michael
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0 posted 2000-03-17 01:20 PM


NEVER AGAIN!


Manifested to perfection,
Tempered in darkness and dejection,
The sweetest adulterate inflection
Of velvet truths, of scarlet lies.

On the border of dream and vison,
Sought to suffer by decision,
Bought and buried in derision
Ripping to shreds all ties.

In the kiss and in the crises,
Adorned to such flagrant vises,
Scorned and mourned by compromises,
Forever caged in shame.

Pledge me never again allegiance,
Dispose of pride and deny credence.
In the future, the past, the pretense,
Never again speak my name!


Michael Anderson

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 For all behind was dark and drear,
And all before was night and fear.
How many hours of night or day
In those suspended pangs I lay,
I could not tell; I scarcely knew
If this were human breath I drew.

Lord Byron



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demonic~angel
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since 2000-03-11
Posts 54
Kansas
1 posted 2000-03-17 01:31 PM


WoW!!!! Masterfully written...you have such great talent as a poet...WoW...Very gothic in my humble opinion...I love it...its hmm...dark and mysterious...like me...hehe..j/k...great work...

 Messenger of fear in sight
Dark deception kills the light
~Metallica~

Dark Enchantress
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since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258
meet Morgana
2 posted 2000-03-17 04:17 PM


This was absolutely wonderful Michael...so beautiful with it's gothic feel and heavy expression. A master of tongue you are...I could only dream of writing in such a way.  

               Yours truly,
                  Angel


 "The dark weight of the hour
humming madly
filling my head
with blood
and sorrow
and dread
the executioner's song."
-Jewel
"The Dark Bells"

~*Angel of Darkness*~



Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
3 posted 2000-03-17 05:05 PM


Michael-

As always, STUNNING my dear! This one had a little more anger and edge than some of your other pieces...that's not a bad thing k LOL. I especially liked the last line! As always, I read your work with complete honor.

Amy  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
4 posted 2000-03-17 05:42 PM


Aye my liege, master of sword and tongue, with a poet's heart.. well done as always Michael  

 May the world hug you today,
With it's warmth and love.
I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart,
That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world,
Wishing you well and
wishing you love......
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)


serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

5 posted 2000-03-17 10:56 PM


A most painful oath, I know...Write a "smiley"  for me, will ya?  I love it when you are full of wonder...
serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

6 posted 2000-03-17 11:02 PM


A re-post to say I'm sorry...that last post sounded awfully like quarters in a
jukebox...write as you feel, i will read...
(in incredible awe...)

KimW
Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 268
Medford, Oregon, USA
7 posted 2000-03-17 11:09 PM


I am always pulled in and taken along the path of your feelings and expressions - another Incredible one Michael!!

Kim

danni
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since 1999-11-20
Posts 688
wisconsin
8 posted 2000-03-18 10:19 AM


at the risk of sounding a little twisted, i loved the anger expressed in this. it kind of revives the soul to get angry, constructively. i only wish i could express it in the manner that you do. very well done, like always.  

 i love too much, and not enough.

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

9 posted 2000-03-18 11:17 AM


On the border of dream and vison,
Sought to suffer by decision,
Bought and buried in derision
Ripping to shreds all ties.

In the kiss and in the crises,
Adorned to such flagrant vises,
Scorned and mourned by compromises,
Forever caged in shame.

-------------

this one has a sharp egde to it M, excellent rhyme and building pace as you read it...
perfect choice of words...
as always, awed by you, jm

 Now for me some words come easy
But I know that they don't mean that much
Compared with the things that are said when lovers touch
You never knew what I loved in you
I don't know what you loved in me
Maybe the picture of somebody you were hoping I might be
jackson browne



poetFemmeFatale
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since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646
Arkansas
10 posted 2000-03-18 04:29 PM


Uh...wow!  I think I'll just tiptoe out of here, and simply say "well done sir!"  No mention of your name, see?     Geesh, does this mean I can't email you?  LOL  
Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA
11 posted 2000-03-18 07:36 PM


Nice rhyme and rhythm, Michael.  Perfect for the darker side.  The pain is evident.  
Aiden Kelly
Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 148
Ft. Wayne, IN USA
12 posted 2000-03-19 01:33 AM


WOW! WOW! WOW!  can i just say how much i admire poets who can write so beautifully and say so much and still confine it all to rhyme and meter and yet it doesn't seem confined at all!!! (did that make any sense?)  i love this!  absolutely masterful.  so much pain, so much loss, and so much anger and bitterness.  WOW!  
WolfsMate
Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 121
New York
13 posted 2000-03-19 10:24 PM


From one who has felt the burns of love and loss, excellent verse. I can understand these feelings all too well.

 "You never have to worry...Never fear for I am near"

Jannel
Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492
Muncie, IN, USA
14 posted 2000-03-19 10:30 PM


darkness is yours. you seem to master these words. and a very interesting rhyme style.
jannel

 "I'm just saying
that we've mistaken one
for thousands of words,
and for that mistake
I've caused you such pain
that I damn that word."
-10000 Maniacs "Jezebel"



wolfie97
Member
since 1999-10-18
Posts 58
Newcastle, WY USA
15 posted 2000-03-20 01:20 AM


very good!

  Sclice open inspiration, and bleed the beauty of art from within. ==Garrett-'sneaky'-Gall==



Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
16 posted 2000-03-20 07:33 AM


demonic angel, well you can never go wrong with Dark and Mysterious...quite the potent combination there.  

Angel, that's quite a compliment, a humble thank you.

Amy, there was much bitterness in this one - yes.  A good way to release it if nothing else.

serenity, I have a smiley one coming just for you, promise.

Kim, Glad to have you walkin next to me.

danni, LOL  @ twisted.  Well, I must "twist" off a lot me thinks.  So glad you enjoyed this one.

Femme, try to imagine I wrote this one to my mother...LOL  My pen of emotion leaks from many many sources.

Aiden, that made perfect sense...thank you.

Wolf's Mate - so glad to see you here... I am only sad to know you relate so well to these feelings    I hope you will hang out with us a little, that's what the Dark room is for ya know?

Jannel, I honestly think Darkness becomes me at times.


Thank you all for the kind replies.


Michael

poetFemmeFatale
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since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646
Arkansas
17 posted 2000-03-20 12:04 PM


Whew!  (wiping brow)  
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