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demonic~angel
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0 posted 2000-03-15 10:35 PM


Tears stream down my face
Inside I feel pain
I close my eyes hoping that the pain is gone
I feel it burning forever turning.
Burning out of control
Never going to ashes.
Never fading to black.
My heart scarring black
You scream mistake
I feel it taking over my body
Fire surges through me
I can't see
I am blind
I long to feel again
This pain stays beside me
It hurts
It surges through my soul
Twisting my soul into a black whole
Light can't escape
Demons invade my mind
Always paranoid that they are out to get me
Why can't they see
What they are doing to me
Insanity surges through my veins
Never knowing what to do next
Insanity fills my head
I see you standing there
Laughing at me
Pointing at me
Haunting me
Taunting me
Never letting me be



 Carpe Diem...

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SEA
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1 posted 2000-03-15 10:42 PM


D~A~ I hope you run far away from anyone making you feel like this! Great poem! -SEA
Janet Marie
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2 posted 2000-03-15 11:39 PM


WOW damn powerful poem here...
bone chilling and heartbreaking...
the images of the fire and scorching were superb...
very good work
jm

 Now for me some words come easy
But I know that they don't mean that much
Compared with the things that are said when lovers touch
You never knew what I loved in you
I don't know what you loved in me
Maybe the picture of somebody you were hoping I might be
jackson browne



Sven
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3 posted 2000-03-16 10:55 PM


Wow, DA... this just screams off the page. . .

"Insanity surges through my veins. . ."  doesn't it through all of our veins?

Powerful and quite dark indeed!

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 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


demonic~angel
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since 2000-03-11
Posts 54
Kansas
4 posted 2000-03-16 11:07 PM


Thanks for the replies...I just wish it would go away...It just stays there in me...never letting me be...

 Carpe Diem...

Isis
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Posts 6296
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5 posted 2000-03-17 05:40 PM


Dark and strong writing here, superb!!  

 May the world hug you today,
With it's warmth and love.
I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart,
That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world,
Wishing you well and
wishing you love......
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)


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