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TanAngel
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0 posted 2000-03-15 12:45 PM



Rescue me sweet flower
Let your thorns and peirce my gentle hand
Hold your beauty, and leave my touch
Set my soul at ease with your sweet melody
Allow the color of your bloom wistle along my fingers
Sing your reasuring melody into the world below
Learn the morning dew within your grasp
Yet never hold your breath...

 "Dreams are not a reality, no matter how much we wish"-TanAngel

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Michael
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1 posted 2000-03-15 01:04 PM


Wow - I locve the first two lines.  To hold that flower, you have to be willing to take the thorns... This was beautiful.


Michael

Janet Marie
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2 posted 2000-03-15 01:31 PM


Set my soul at ease with your sweet melody
very nice TA,
take care, jm

 Now for me some words come easy
But I know that they don't mean that much
Compared with the things that are said when lovers touch
You never knew what I loved in you
I don't know what you loved in me
Maybe the picture of somebody you were hoping I might be
jackson browne



ill_tactics
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3 posted 2000-03-15 02:01 PM


Thats such a beautiful poem, with a beautiful image, well done.  Much love, One love, PEACE
SEA
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4 posted 2000-03-16 12:56 PM


TA~ Lovely! I really like this!   -SEA
~Venus~
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5 posted 2000-03-17 10:23 AM


I'm sending this to the top!

 ~goddess of love, passion, and desire~

I'll be here...why? I'll
be waiting...for what?
'll be waiting for you
so...if you come here,
you'll find me...

I promise.

TanAngel
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since 2000-02-01
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6 posted 2000-03-17 07:01 PM


Thank-you all so much...your support means a lot too me...

 "Dreams are not a reality, no matter how much we wish"-TanAngel

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