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Sweet Flower... |
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TanAngel Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 168Oviedo, Florida, USA |
Rescue me sweet flower Let your thorns and peirce my gentle hand Hold your beauty, and leave my touch Set my soul at ease with your sweet melody Allow the color of your bloom wistle along my fingers Sing your reasuring melody into the world below Learn the morning dew within your grasp Yet never hold your breath... "Dreams are not a reality, no matter how much we wish"-TanAngel |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Wow - I locve the first two lines. To hold that flower, you have to be willing to take the thorns... This was beautiful. Michael |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Set my soul at ease with your sweet melody very nice TA, take care, jm Now for me some words come easy But I know that they don't mean that much Compared with the things that are said when lovers touch You never knew what I loved in you I don't know what you loved in me Maybe the picture of somebody you were hoping I might be jackson browne |
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ill_tactics Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 149 |
Thats such a beautiful poem, with a beautiful image, well done. Much love, One love, PEACE |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
TA~ Lovely! I really like this!  -SEA |
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~Venus~ Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 128 |
I'm sending this to the top! ~goddess of love, passion, and desire~ I'll be here...why? I'll be waiting...for what? 'll be waiting for you so...if you come here, you'll find me... I promise. |
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TanAngel Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 168Oviedo, Florida, USA |
Thank-you all so much...your support means a lot too me... "Dreams are not a reality, no matter how much we wish"-TanAngel |
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