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| Dark Poetry #1 |
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Mai Ling Junior Member
since 2000-03-15
Posts 15 |
Time has come between us, parting off from our jagged embrace Silken linings of pinks, blues and grays has reminisced leaving us in yesterday's phase We go on and on, telling fervent lies hoping to succumb, out of the realities of life Yet when the night is dead, and the moon is gone slowly our vision fades, like phantoms in the dark |
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CrEaTuRe Member
since 2000-01-01
Posts 260Kuala Lumpur,Malaysia |
welcome to passion  full of emotions and it's a great the way you expressed yourself  well done |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392 |
Welcome, welcome, to the place of many with words that scream to the world....welcome to passions! So much emotion is such a few lines....wonderful! There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul... a-alibaster |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Hi, welcome to passions.. this is very well written and expressed, very well thought out, nice to have you here with us. take care, jm Now for me some words come easy But I know that they don't mean that much Compared with the things that are said when lovers touch You never knew what I loved in you I don't know what you loved in me Maybe the picture of somebody you were hoping I might be jackson browne |
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StarrGazer Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679Texas |
Welcome to passions nicely expresssed piece !! Look forward to reading more ~*Love begins with a smile, grows with a kiss, and ends with a tear*~ |
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ill_tactics Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 149 |
W....O....W! I liked this poem very much, nice job. Very well written, and i'm sure well thought out. Much love, One love, pEACE |
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TanAngel Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 168Oviedo, Florida, USA |
Welcome to Dark Passions or as I call it DP...This is so well expressed I hope to see more of your work soon "Dreams are not a reality, no matter how much we wish"-TanAngel |
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Aiden Kelly Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 148Ft. Wayne, IN USA |
welcome!!  ) i like how this poem looks so simple yet has such a deep meaning. you have a lovely style. i look forward to reading more of your poetry! welcome! ) |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Mai Ling welcome to Passions and the dark forum. I loved your first post, good descriptions and visuals. I like your style, awaiting more soon.  May the world hug you today, With it's warmth and love. I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart, That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world, Wishing you well and wishing you love...... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
"slowly our vision fades, like phantoms in the dark" I like this ending, compliments the whole poem, which I really like as well! I look forward to more. Welcome.  Joy |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Mai Ling~ WELCOME! This is so pretty. Very emotional. Wonderful! -SEA |
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demonic~angel Member
since 2000-03-11
Posts 54Kansas |
Glad to have you here...*huggz* welcome to passions...wonderfully written...you express your emotions and feelings very beautifully... take care Carpe Diem... |
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Mai Ling Junior Member
since 2000-03-15
Posts 15 |
Dear Guys, Thank you all so much for welcoming me here in your family of poets. Rest assured, you'll be seeing a lot of my works from then on.. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This poem is enchanting and exotic...enjoyed reading this. James |
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~Venus~ Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 128 |
Nice...hope to see more of you... ~goddess of love, passion, and desire~ I'll be here...why? I'll be waiting...for what? 'll be waiting for you so...if you come here, you'll find me... I promise. |
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devinmaria Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 130Middletown, Ohio |
great first post. welcome, and i look forward to more posts from you. aimee Trust I seek and I find in you. Everyday for us something new. Open mind for a different view, and nothing else matters. --Metallica |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
This is beautiful Mai Ling...so much expression and meaning... Welcome to Dark Passions...I hope you come to love it as much as we do... Yours truly, Angel "The dark weight of the hour humming madly filling my head with blood and sorrow and dread the executioner's song." -Jewel "The Dark Bells" ~*Angel of Darkness*~ |
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