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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
There was only one thought In his head as he flashed A determined smile A lifetime of hurt He would make it all Go away When he grew old and Had to give up The things that made him Feel alive He was already dead But the ringing in his ears And the pain in his soul Would never, ever Go away He couldn’t find a reason For continuing on Like this or Living to die one day Doesn’t make a difference Doesn’t make any sense at all Maybe he’ll find something To believe in That will make this All worthwhile, somehow And make it all, Go away |
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SEA 
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
JML~ you have a way of making me want to comfort you and tell you everything will be ok.((hugs))-SEA |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Everything is ok....I am fine....its just a poem....LOL But thanks for the offer by the way...*L* |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
JML~ I know it's just a poem sweetie, but the words you write make my heart ache and want to comfort.  -SEA |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Then that is a good thing, right SEA? |
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TanAngel Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 168Oviedo, Florida, USA |
Beautiful...I know the feeling...it may just be a poem but you describe it so well... "Dreams are not a reality, no matter how much we wish"-TanAngel |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
JML~ yes, my sweet one, it is!  -SEA |
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Wikket Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 340Santa Clara, CA USA |
JML, I know the feeling very well. In fact, I'm kind of reminded of the song "All Go Away" by NIN with this one. See my signature below...Great Work BTW! --Jamie  "...In my heart I know it's still the same Though it all seems different now I know it's still the same Everywhere I look you're all I see Just a fading, fu*$#ng reminder Of who I used to be C'mon tell me You make this all go away You make this all go away I'm down to just one thing And I'm starting to scare myself You make this all go away You make it all go away I just want something I just want something I can never have..." by Trent Reznor, NIN-Broken |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
reznor's got nothing on you jer...  love this one...but you already knew that stalking you, yes.. jm Now for me some words come easy But I know that they don't mean that much Compared with the things that are said when lovers touch You never knew what I loved in you I don't know what you loved in me Maybe the picture of somebody you were hoping I might be jackson browne |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
Thank ya'll so much, especially Wikket for the NIN comparison, that is the highest honor for me, Trent rules... But, the song is titled "Something I can never have" from his debut album Pretty Hate Machine. Thanks too janet...don't say that, i'm not fit to carry Trent's mini moog 9000...LOL |
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devinmaria Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 130Middletown, Ohio |
great one as usual. sorry no replys from me lately. they put you in a class with reznor, you must feel on top of the world. reminds me of the song "keep away" by a fave band of mine by the name of Godsmack. maybe just the hook but anyways. when things wont seem to go away, you want to make yourself go away, i get it. aimee Trust I seek and I find in you. Everyday for us something new. Open mind for a different view, and nothing else matters. --Metallica |
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PoeticKnight Senior Member
since 2000-01-20
Posts 1144New Orleans, LA |
You get it exactly....thanks for your constant kindness. |
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