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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
Pain apart Reachs down torn hearts hold me now All here in Me creates eternal sins Fathers hate please soul drowned me swallowed whole hear me growl Here we are In the place hold my heart to your face do you see me in the dark deep down low where dogs don't bark Did you write the Book of Love And do you have faith in God above If the Bible tells you so Do you believe in rock 'n roll Can music save your mortal soul And can you teach me how to dance real slow |
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CrEaTuRe Member
since 2000-01-01
Posts 260Kuala Lumpur,Malaysia |
Walter this is full of meaning yet in few words you put a picture of hurt that speak for itself....great job dear |
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virgil baichoo New Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 8 |
Walter the pen is mighter than the sword and with your imaginative words you brought your poem to life . Keep them comming. onelove virgil |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
walter...your pen drips with darkness and pain in this one...but as always...with perfection of emotion. take care, jm Now for me some words come easy But I know that they don't mean that much Compared with the things that are said when lovers touch You never knew what I loved in you I don't know what you loved in me Maybe the picture of somebody you were hoping I might be jackson browne |
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