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ill_tactics
Member

since 2000-02-11

Posts 149

0 posted 2000-03-11 08:24 PM

Silently a storm moves in,
clowds creep
slowly they begin to weep,
lightening strikes
fear into the sky,
as the thunder growls
the world trembles
in fear,
the sky shuts its eyes,
the darkness overcomes the land,
deafness lingers in the air,
the huff and puff of the wind
brings a cold chill,
the sun peeks in,
but the clouds
they block its view
in darkness the heart of
the earth sits
scorned by evils blindness,
taunted by everlasting death
soaked by tears
lungs frozen by the cold
My world dies.

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-03-11 08:37 PM

ill's back!!
very bone chilling imagery in this...well written expression...PERFECT for our home DP.
glad to see you posting again.
take care, jm

Now for me some words come easy
But I know that they don't mean that much
Compared with the things that are said when lovers touch
You never knew what I loved in you
I don't know what you loved in me
Maybe the picture of somebody you were hoping I might be
jackson browne

Danny Holloway
Member Elite

since 2000-01-15

Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK

2 posted 2000-03-13 01:35 PM

I like the imagery her also. Gripping!
On the dark side for sure.
Nice write.

a-alibaster
Member

since 2000-01-08

Posts 392

3 posted 2000-03-13 04:59 PM

The imagery here is grand and so well written, placed together as if there is absolutly no other way that it could have been......Wonderful!!!!

There is an alter ego which
dwells in every soul...
a-alibaster

Dark Enchantress
Senior Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 1258
meet Morgana

4 posted 2000-03-13 05:04 PM

I love this...it's so beautiful even in it's darkness...

Yours truly,
Angel

"The dark weight of the hour
humming madly
filling my head
with blood
and sorrow
and dread
the executioner's song."
-Jewel
"The Dark Bells"

~*Angel of Darkness*~

ill_tactics
Member

since 2000-02-11

Posts 149

5 posted 2000-03-13 09:09 PM

TANX TO ALL, I ADORE ALL WHO CARE. MUCH LOVE, ONE LOVE, PEACE

~LOVE TO THOSE WHO LOVE ME, AND PEACE TO THOSE WHO DEEM IT NECESSARY~

JOY 14
Senior Member

since 1999-09-22

Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA

6 posted 2000-03-14 02:13 PM

Ooo, I can feel that storm swirling around me. I'm getting goosebumps even.

Joy

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