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demonic~angel
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since 2000-03-11
Posts 54
Kansas

0 posted 2000-03-13 01:19 PM



I walk through the noisy hallways.
Laughter passes me by.
Eager voices float over me.
Kids pass me by.
Never acknowledging me.
Why can’t they see?
What they are doing to me.
I say “hi.”
I get no reply.
I sit at the back of the class.
Far from others stares.
On my face a blank glare.
No one seems to care.
Or even notice that I am here.





 Carpe Diem...

© Copyright 2000 Misty Hawley - All Rights Reserved
Danny Holloway
Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034
Tulsa, OK
1 posted 2000-03-13 01:26 PM


Yes, you are here and just as wonderful as the others.  There are good days and bad and come in equal doses.  My daughter used to complain about this same thing. All things change with time. Keep your spirits up and try sitting at the front of the class. Don't allow others to determine your behavior.
Sorry if i'm rambling.  This is the advice I gave my daughter also.
Smile a lot, it will drive them crazy.

demonic~angel
Member
since 2000-03-11
Posts 54
Kansas
2 posted 2000-03-13 01:33 PM


Thanks...I still feel that way...I can't show happiness on the outside when all that I feel on the inside is pain and despair...

 Carpe Diem...

CrEaTuRe
Member
since 2000-01-01
Posts 260
Kuala Lumpur,Malaysia
3 posted 2000-03-13 01:36 PM


It's a nice work..... i had the same problem just give them some time before they start to warm up to you   It's a matter of time they'll want to be seen with you . It's always the same,time and controling yourself when they try to anger you , is very important ....  

take care , *hugz* you back. we do understand each other i guess  

CrEaTuRe

StarrGazer
Senior Member
since 2000-03-05
Posts 679
Texas
4 posted 2000-03-13 02:12 PM


angel - i know this feeling too how can the world go on continuing to turn when it seems as if our worlds are crashing to the ground and believe me it is better to express your true emotions than hiding behind a mask of happiness learned that the hard way... hope things get easier for you as time passes and I'm always here if you need to talk ((((hugzzz)))) take care of yourself  

 ~*Love begins with a smile, grows with a kiss, and ends with a tear*~



Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

5 posted 2000-03-13 04:41 PM


sometimes we all feel invisible, sometimes i prefer to be....good poem of emotion here.
take care,jm

 Now for me some words come easy
But I know that they don't mean that much
Compared with the things that are said when lovers touch
You never knew what I loved in you
I don't know what you loved in me
Maybe the picture of somebody you were hoping I might be
jackson browne



ill_tactics
Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 149

6 posted 2000-03-13 07:41 PM


From one person passed by to another person passed by, welcome to the club.  I get that reaction one too many times, but I let it slip, cuz I know I am someone to be recognized.  Keep your head up.  Much love, One love, PEACE  Oh yeah, great poem.  
sonjes
Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564
North Carolina
7 posted 2000-03-13 08:02 PM


demonic~angel-
  Let me say that I, unfortunately have been there.  When I was in high school, I felt that I was alone, and noone really appreciated me.  Your words speak volumes of pain.  I am posting a poem for you, I wrote it ten years ago, but it still makes me feel better to this day.
             ~Sonje

  Don't care what people say
Just follow your own way
Don't give up and use the chance
To return to innocence.
-Enigma

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