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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
He sits on his own Contemplates his soul the darkest crach on a wall And the love in his all Around him snowflakes fall and the the screamers call The silence has a voice sitting in an emptey hall Now in the air the cries Bitter balls from boiling eyes drop as his souls sighs and the darkness collides Reactions in embittered coil And the heart poured hot oil Now the darkness began to call And the pain that made him soil Sitting alone in this place With darkness in his face And the souls bitter call engulfs his heart and he falls Did you write the Book of Love And do you have faith in God above If the Bible tells you so Do you believe in rock 'n roll Can music save your mortal soul And can you teach me how to dance real slow |
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danni Senior Member
since 1999-11-20
Posts 688wisconsin |
exceptional as usual walter. i especially liked the third stanza. i love too much, and not enough. |
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Anthony Junior Member
since 2000-03-13
Posts 12 |
reading poems like this make me wonder whether i should be writing on this site. Superb. |
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demonic~angel Member
since 2000-03-11
Posts 54Kansas |
This poem seems so much like my life right now...surrounded in darkness...supreb... Carpe Diem... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
well, i was in walter withdrawls the last few days...(smile) missed your dark and image rich works of art... and your reply to isis on rule of replying were words of wisdom...as always  take care, jm Now for me some words come easy But I know that they don't mean that much Compared with the things that are said when lovers touch You never knew what I loved in you I don't know what you loved in me Maybe the picture of somebody you were hoping I might be jackson browne |
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ill_tactics Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 149 |
"...she likes it, she likes it..." That was a superb poem. Very well written, cant wait to read more. Much love, One love, PEACE |
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