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Scarlet Lady
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since 2000-02-11
Posts 242
Midwest

0 posted 2000-03-12 11:35 PM



Rushing torrent of tears that flood
No where to hold them back
Overflowing hot with emotion
Cleansing and breaking to set free
Helping me to finally see

At a drop of a hat
No glance can I hide
I try as I may to run
But the tears they just come
And they will not stop for nothing

Why do they fall so easily
And my heart cut to bleed
What has brought this great offence
Made me rethink all that I am
Made me look at this stench

Only time will tell
Give me strength to overcome
But for now I am numb
The windows are all foggy
But still I search to see
See my way to the next hour

This  release is so despondant
Yet it is my friend
Crying is my way home
To where I once  belonged
Helping my heart to mend again

Crying for now is my best friend!



[This message has been edited by Illusion (edited 03-12-2000).]

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Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-03-12 11:41 PM


emotionally perfect poem... cry those tears..they help heal and give us strength, take care, jm

 Now for me some words come easy
But I know that they don't mean that much
Compared with the things that are said when lovers touch
You never knew what I loved in you
I don't know what you loved in me
Maybe the picture of somebody you were hoping I might be
jackson browne



JOY 14
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since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA
2 posted 2000-03-13 02:09 PM


Crying can be the best thing.  Feels so good to let out all that emotion through your tears.  Liked this, Illusion.

Joy

ill_tactics
Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 149

3 posted 2000-03-13 07:21 PM


So many tears you might cry, I have cried a million.  Heres a tissue.  Well written poem, good content.  Cant wait to hear more.  Much love, One love, PEACE
Aimster
Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
4 posted 2000-03-13 08:51 PM


This one was a zinger for the heart. Go ahead and cry, I'll cry along with you. I think crying is sometimes like you said the best thing. It cleanses the soul and can help to restore hope and faith. I really liked this poem and its meaning. Thanks for sharing with all of us.

AMY  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~

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