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Trynete
Junior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 35
Cape Cod, MA

0 posted 2000-03-12 02:19 PM



Up all night
sleep all day
At 19 still trying to find my way.
In my sleep I scream,
In my dreams I work out my hate, my anger,
my fears.
I have so many hurt feelings,
I'm so stressed out,
I'm surprised I don't
sleepwalk.
I have so many material things,
I'm greatful,
but emotionally I have nothing.
Hurt so many times,
that I have no tears left to cry.
Everday I wish I could die,
for some reason I always feel
empty inside,
And everyday I wish I
could find the reason why.
I've searched my whole life,
hi and low,
but I still just can't seem
to fill that hole.

I'M BACK!!!! =D



 To live is to love, and to love is to live... the meaning of life.

© Copyright 2000 Trynete - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-03-12 02:24 PM


welcome back
powerful emotional thoughts in this one...
im trying to fill those same holes...the poetry helps... nice work
take care, jm

 Now for me some words come easy
But I know that they don't mean that much
Compared with the things that are said when lovers touch
You never knew what I loved in you
I don't know what you loved in me
Maybe the picture of somebody you were hoping I might be
jackson browne



demonic~angel
Member
since 2000-03-11
Posts 54
Kansas
2 posted 2000-03-12 02:56 PM


Good poem and w/b...Material things are nothing compared to the hurt you experienced.
JOY 14
Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA
3 posted 2000-03-12 06:16 PM


If you have got your money
and your bed on which to sleep
It still won't matter
For you're in too deep
Your tears imerse you
While you stand
With no more tears
And a feeling of despair
Don't get too down,
Your only 19,
And your whole life's ahead of you
One big open book,
One unbelievable dream!

Don't give up yet, Trynete!

Joy

Severn
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

4 posted 2000-03-12 06:21 PM


Believe me - been here...sometimes I still am (though I'm 25 lol)

This is an excellent expression of your feelings.



 'Writing sharpens life;
life enriches writing'
Sylvia Plath

SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676
with you
5 posted 2000-03-13 09:25 PM


Trynete~ As I sit here thinking that this year I'll be 30...... you're only 19 sweetie, life has barely begun. It will get better! -SEA
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