Dark Poetry #1 |
No Tears Left To Cry |
Trynete Junior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 35Cape Cod, MA |
Up all night sleep all day At 19 still trying to find my way. In my sleep I scream, In my dreams I work out my hate, my anger, my fears. I have so many hurt feelings, I'm so stressed out, I'm surprised I don't sleepwalk. I have so many material things, I'm greatful, but emotionally I have nothing. Hurt so many times, that I have no tears left to cry. Everday I wish I could die, for some reason I always feel empty inside, And everyday I wish I could find the reason why. I've searched my whole life, hi and low, but I still just can't seem to fill that hole. I'M BACK!!!! =D To live is to love, and to love is to live... the meaning of life. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
welcome back powerful emotional thoughts in this one... im trying to fill those same holes...the poetry helps... nice work take care, jm Now for me some words come easy But I know that they don't mean that much Compared with the things that are said when lovers touch You never knew what I loved in you I don't know what you loved in me Maybe the picture of somebody you were hoping I might be jackson browne |
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demonic~angel Member
since 2000-03-11
Posts 54Kansas |
Good poem and w/b...Material things are nothing compared to the hurt you experienced. |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
If you have got your money and your bed on which to sleep It still won't matter For you're in too deep Your tears imerse you While you stand With no more tears And a feeling of despair Don't get too down, Your only 19, And your whole life's ahead of you One big open book, One unbelievable dream! Don't give up yet, Trynete! Joy |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Believe me - been here...sometimes I still am (though I'm 25 lol) This is an excellent expression of your feelings. 'Writing sharpens life; life enriches writing' Sylvia Plath |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Trynete~ As I sit here thinking that this year I'll be 30...... you're only 19 sweetie, life has barely begun. It will get better! -SEA |
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