Dark Poetry #1 |
His Story...Where has my lady gone? |
JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Where are you my dear? My twister of fate My elegant beauty of fair, fragrent lace Of hair flowing Down your spine Entangling, so swift As on wings of a bird That fly through the night That is you my dear You resemble a bird In flight Where are you? My love- I've looked all around And have caught glimpses of you in between The forest twigs And brances Your smile I see as I run after you A white scarf whipping in the wind behind As you disapeer into the trees. Laughter I hear From the child within you That makes me heave My chest and colapse with joy From chasing you! Oh, my heart can't take much of this lonliness, dear As I call out for you For your return And for your love Only when you come back will I be truly happy Where are you my dear My elegant princess devine.. My beautiful twister of fate? |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Where are you my dear? My twister of fate My elegant beauty of fair, fragrent lace Of hair flowing Down your spine Entangling, so swift As on wings of a bird That fly through the night That is you my dear You resemble a bird In " JOY this is SO beautiful a truly PRETTY poem...love the imagery...I cant wait to see HER story...jm you're really alone at last... you're bored and fading fast, if it's true you'll fall from the past all you'll have to do is ask you'll feel but never be you want and always need price you pay for wanting to see will you have all you've ever dreamed... robin wilson |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Janet Marie- Thanks! Not just for the reply but the idea. Her story. The other side. I like that and I am going to go write it right now. Awesome. Thanks again. Joy |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Joy this was so beautiful....... I too would like her side of it all May the world hug you today, With it's warmth and love. I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart, That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world, Wishing you well and wishing you love...... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Thanks Isis. I'm working on it. Look for it soon here! Joy |
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demonic~angel Member
since 2000-03-11
Posts 54Kansas |
Awesome and beautiful...so beautiful...its like a fantasy...to me.. Carpe Diem... |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Thanks demonic~angel! I just posted Her Story if you want to read it! It is fantasy to me too. Not just boy meets girl anymore, Prince meets Princess! Joy |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
JOY~ this is really great.....now I gotta find HER story! -SEA |
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