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JOY 14
Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA

0 posted 2000-03-10 06:56 PM


Where are you my dear?
My twister of fate
My elegant beauty of fair, fragrent lace
Of hair flowing
Down your spine
Entangling, so swift
As on wings of a bird
That fly through the night
That is you my dear
You resemble a bird
In flight
Where are you?
My love-
I've looked all around
And have caught glimpses of you in between
The forest twigs
And brances
Your smile
I see as I run after you
A white scarf whipping in the wind behind
As you disapeer into the trees.
Laughter I hear
From the child within you
That makes me heave
My chest and colapse with joy
From chasing you!
Oh, my heart can't take much of this lonliness, dear
As I call out for you
For your return
And for your love
Only when you come back will I be
truly happy
Where are you my dear
My elegant princess devine..
My beautiful twister of fate?


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Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-03-10 11:18 PM


Where are you my dear?
My twister of fate
My elegant beauty of fair, fragrent lace
Of hair flowing
Down your spine
Entangling, so swift
As on wings of a bird
That fly through the night
That is you my dear
You resemble a bird
In "

JOY this is SO beautiful  a truly PRETTY poem...love the imagery...I cant wait to see HER story...jm


 you're really alone at last...
you're bored and fading fast,
if it's true you'll fall from the past
all you'll have to do is ask
you'll feel but never be
you want and always need
price you pay for wanting to see
will you have all you've ever dreamed...
robin wilson


JOY 14
Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA
2 posted 2000-03-11 11:01 AM


Janet Marie-

Thanks!  Not just for the reply but the idea.  Her story.  The other side.  I like that and I am going to go write it right now.  Awesome.  Thanks again.  

Joy

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
3 posted 2000-03-12 01:07 AM


Joy this was so beautiful.......  I too would like her side of it all  

 May the world hug you today,
With it's warmth and love.
I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart,
That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world,
Wishing you well and
wishing you love......
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)


JOY 14
Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA
4 posted 2000-03-12 06:35 PM


Thanks Isis.  I'm working on it.  Look for it soon here!  

Joy

demonic~angel
Member
since 2000-03-11
Posts 54
Kansas
5 posted 2000-03-12 06:48 PM


Awesome and beautiful...so beautiful...its like a fantasy...to me..

 Carpe Diem...

JOY 14
Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA
6 posted 2000-03-12 07:02 PM


Thanks demonic~angel!  I just posted Her Story if you want to read it!     It is fantasy to me too.  Not just boy meets girl anymore, Prince meets Princess!  

Joy

SEA
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Posts 22676
with you
7 posted 2000-03-13 09:32 PM


JOY~ this is really great.....now I gotta find HER story!   -SEA
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