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For_Never Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 125Cincinnati, oh, United States of America |
And the time has come... For me to meet that great apart.. Flitting not here, or there... Finding that great nowhere... Cycles run full course it seems.. and those who thought forever it would be.. Pain isn't always held in the reams.. For fate was build on absence of hate.. Neutral in all things... Tepid like water standing flat.. There is no begining, or final cut... and the climax was held in rut Blackend hopes, shattered dreams, binding hopes, endless rot... If this is existence in this life? Come on.... tell me... What Does hell got? For a fateful night of passion, since my heart need one last vent, I believe I am willing to pay that black widows rent... |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Hell a land of dismal nothing, heat and evil. A smart fellow like you would be picked clean real quick. Edward please icq me or soemthing, you always sound so sad... May the world hug you today, With it's warmth and love. I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart, That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world, Wishing you well and wishing you love...... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Cycles run full course it seems.. and those who thought forever it would be.. Pain isn't always held in the reams.. For fate was build on absence of hate.. Neutral in all things... Tepid like water standing flat.. --- damn...this is very poweful... i read it 3 times...will read it more and still feel the depth...the impact of the ending line...powerful... exceptional expression. take care, jm Now for me some words come easy But I know that they don't mean that much Compared with the things that are said when lovers touch You never knew what I loved in you I don't know what you loved in me Maybe the picture of somebody you were hoping I might be jackson browne |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Well now! This rocks! First off, I LOVE the title!!! Creative and descriptive!!! And the poem followed suit!! Great!!! |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
For_Never~ Hell is a place I hope you never see. This life is a gift, what you choose to do with it is up to you........-SEA |
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ill_tactics Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 149 |
Life is probably what were in, thats what I think. HELL is what you make of it, a state of mind. great poem tho'. Much love, One love, PEACE |
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For_Never Member
since 1999-10-27
Posts 125Cincinnati, oh, United States of America |
THanks all, but truly. If hell is worse than this existance....at least it may be a change...secular I maybe....but,..bored.. I am...bring hell on...so that we may parley a bit.... EAB |
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